FUCK! it's like world war three all this is building up inside me you ask me if im 'ok?' ya nothings wrong. i say why cant you see that my heart is bursting; my head is throbbing why cant you look deeper into my eyes why cant you see my LIES! i want you to know; i want you to open the door i want you to see that I CANT TAKE THIS ANYMORE i wouldnt ever tell you i wouldnt ever give you a clue if you cant figure me out then i am through please tell me you see whats wrong i've held this shit inside me for so long but i can see you will never tell; you will never know i want YOU to be happy now so GO leave me; i set you free that song is about how whenever i has something inside me i cant just let it go. i want, i NEED someone to understand and when no one does...it can be fatal.
Maybe if it didn't start off with such a word, it would be even better than it already is. Good work though. Very nice.
Yeah not necessarily bigger words, but more descriptive words, but I can image the song being sung by slipknot or the first verse by RATM