Trust.

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    Muri

    Muri It never ends.

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    How can you not tell,
    that I'm different,
    I've been this for years,
    the hating and rejecting,
    has already led me to tears.
    My family wants to get rid of me,
    my friends,
    well they all abandoned me.
    I feel like an outcast,
    I want to leave,
    But I will not end my life,
    that'd mean giving up.

    No one even asks me if I'm alright,
    no one cares,
    if I get hurt.
    I've been betrayed too many times,
    I'm lost,
    I don't trust anyone,
    not even you,
    I'm sorry.
    But you're the only one I can talk to,
    aside for my differences,
    you listen to me,
    and try to help.
    I appreciate that,
    it makes my life worth living.

    See I care for you,
    but I hate myself,
    for not trusting you,
    'cause maybe you'll go,
    and leave me behind?
    I'm so afraid,
    I want to grab hold,
    and trust you with all my heart.
    But no matter how hard,
    I try to convince myself,
    I can't open up completely.

    So please believe me,
    I beg you to wait for me,
    for you I'm fighting this battle.
    I know it's hard,
    I know it's confusing.
    But I need you to trust me,
    like I need to trust you.

    Heh. :)
     
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    MeLiS_

    MeLiS_ Well-Known Member

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    OMFG..

    that is your best work.. it's so emotional.. i can't explain my feelings properly..
     
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    D_A_V_I_D

    D_A_V_I_D Pure Pwnage

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    Totally agreed

    Best one so far. It is awsome, BRILLIANT.

    Very emotional. Awsome stuff.

    Gave me the feeling of 'Carousel' in some bits. Great work. im just speacheless. Keep it up.
     
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    Il inno di morte

    Il inno di morte A noi si schiude il ciel...

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    Totally agreed

    Best one so far. It is awsome, BRILLIANT.

    Very emotional. Awsome stuff.

    Gave me the feeling of 'Carousel' in some bits. Great work. im just speacheless. Keep it up. [/b][/quote]
    AMEN!!!

    this is absolutely a masterpiece! awesome way to express what's inside of you. this is just amazing! way to go!!!
     
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    ahamLP

    ahamLP Well-Known Member

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    This is one of the best poems I have ever ever read,this is awesome,the best from you yet though I should say this shouldnt be your the best of all time,cause you are so much talented that I am damn sure that you will write or have written already,this poem is one of the best I have read,its so deep so so deep and so meaningful, I am really touched by the emotions in the poem,this is awesome,I cant stop praising you,but I am short of words to praise you(where are the words when you need them the most ^_^ ),anyways you have another fan added to your fan list,please post some more of your work,please,and keep writing.
     
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    a life in ashes

    a life in ashes mercury summer

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    wow, i agree this is by far your best work, very powerful....it's something i can really relate to personally which makes it even better.
     
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    Muri

    Muri It never ends.

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    Woah. Really? Thank you all so so so so much! ^_^
    I really appreciate it,when you say my work is good. :)
     

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