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Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by LProx4life, Oct 22, 2005.

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    LProx4life

    LProx4life Well-Known Member

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    Keeps all his eternity as he is left behind
    i try to go forward that i do try
    but when the future becomes the present
    and the present becomes the past
    but at the end the future turns out to be last
    it comes so dramatically it blows you away in 1 blast
    it feels like i keep repeating myself, going and going
    i tried to stop but its just like a never eding story
    as i sit down and put myself to think
    i will never bother in my life to try to blink
    Since i have all my life ahead of me
    I am the 1 who makes me the real person i want to be
    thats just the way i will always think of me
     
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    tremulant

    tremulant Well-Known Member

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    good message.. but it looks like you had trouble expressing yourself :)

    good none the less ^_^
     
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    GrafiTTied

    GrafiTTied Well-Known Member

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    nice............though some lines may sound forced,
    but its good anywayz. ^_^
     

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