...And in a strange turn of events, I have retracted my long titles and called this one "Time's Up, Baby." Crazy, isn't it? Enjoy. "Time's Up, Baby" I think I've got enough love to spread around, In the form of these words pouring out of my mouth, I'm just saying things I don't wanna say, Our time's up, not down, please believe me... I'm alone in the world there's nothing you can do, Except say 'yes' so this emptiness is through, And I loved it when you cried yourself to sleep, It made me see that you're as vunerable as me, When you called me up just to reclaim your life, The tone of your voice sucked me into your lies, And the words you said so harshly to me, We're just nice enough to make me believe, That when the love in your eyes radiated so fine, Like mine it never faded after all this time, The love's here to stay in the back of my mind, Next to the bright lines you shone right in my eyes. I used to say things I really meant, Now I just tell you what you want to hear, I'm pretty sure this ain't the way it's supposed to be, I'm just scared by the way you threatened me. And I think I've got enough love to spread around, In the form of these words pouring out of my mouth, I'm just saying things I don't wanna say, Our time's up, not down, please believe me... I'm feeling quite perplexed but I don't know why, It's taking too long for you to break down and cry, No one understands how much you deserve this, Your crocodile tears must be taking the piss, They fall to the ground as heavy as the rain, Times like these remind me of all my pain, And of sweet car crashes which ruin your life, Enough to rip out this backstabbing knife, It's love or was and will never be again, I sit and watch your pictures, I give in. I used to say things I really meant, Now I just tell you what you want to hear, I'm pretty sure this ain't the way it's supposed to be, I'm just scared by the way you threatened me. And I think I've got enough love to spread around, In the form of these words pouring out of my mouth, I'm just saying things I don't wanna say, Our time's up, not down, please believe me... So when you stabbed me in the back, I wasn't meant to cry, And when you told me we were fine, And you didn't need to try, you lied, So when you stabbed me in the back, I wasn't meant to cry, And when you told me we were fine, And you didn't need to try, you lied. I used to say things I really meant, Now I just tell you what you want to hear, I'm pretty sure this ain't the way it's supposed to be, I'm just scared by the way you threatened me.
Fucking amazing. Y'know I always thought that statement could be misinterpreted. Like... amazing fucking, or amazing as fuck. But never mind
I told you on MSN from the few verses you showed me that this was like the greatest piece of writing you've ever done but I guess after seeing the finished version my opinions have change. This is one of the best pieces of writing I've ever seen anyone do Superduperlyfantasmiclyicalydicalydoogilydobulus