re•gret

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    LinkinJunior

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    re•gret

    This will end up sweet
    I always stay up late
    You know we were never meant to meet
    I’m everything I hate
    I slice myself open just for you
    This will never change
    Another day in view
    Help me exchange

    In a trap like gas
    these tears will pass
    How Could I forget
    This flash of regret

    I feel entrap in this pain
    How could I been misled
    I feel like I am no logner sane
    I can still hear the sirens in my head
    I still remember this betrayal
    This trust has blacken into a scar
    I’m face with this cliché potryal
    take me back through the stars

    In a trap like gas
    these tears will pass
    How Could I forget
    This flash of regret

    I’m haunted by all these years
    Is that what you call romance?
    With all these quiet fears
    ll I needed was another chance
    Our sweet time will end
    Here’s to the lonely days
    You know we’ll never mend
    We’ll go down in a blaze

    In a trap like gas
    these tears will pass
    How Could I forget
    This flash of regret

    just thought to share with you guys, enjoy.
     
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    The Outsider

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    it kinda didnt seem to flow right...it was all over the place for me..
     
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    D_A_V_I_D

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    There were some bits where it didn't flow, also it rhymed to much for my liking, it seemed to become forced in some places.

    This line makes no sense to me, maybe you could explain it?
    and also cause of my australian accent gas and pass don't rhyme. :lol:
     
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    LinkinJunior

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    To me it has to do something with being engulf in a surround gas, not being able to look forward or backward. I just wanted to keep the consistency with the verse and chorus. There has to be a way to say it, it's not suppose to be just spoken. Thanks for the comments so far.
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl

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    Cool.
     

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