It's been a while and I don't know why I haven't scribbled down some lyrics. I have them floating around all the time, I guess I'll start the hendix method and write whatever pops in my head down anywhere so I can remember it. Well here you go it's short and not by for my best work but it's been a while since I've put my thoughts to words so here goes be gentle. L8ter JMJ Untitled Verse My lyrics can't describe The anger & hate I'm letting swell inside The tears, and the thoughts have all built up To the point where your stuck in my head and I'm mind fucked I pray to god I can purge the pain That sits and occupies my left and right brain Chorus I'd like to go back and reveal to the past And admit that I knew shit just wouldn't last I basically couldn't comprehend how Things that are fucked up now would have spawned from what happened then Verse You didn't stop to think of the defenses you went and activated You just sat back and became acclimated Tugging on the short leash that you put me on Was to short to shield from the universal backlash But now you see Karma's a bitch with good aim and she nailed your ass And now you also see that I'm more deadly with a pen or a mic in my right hand
Good, but the whole thing felt a bit forced which can happen when you havn't written in a while. On the whole pretty good but i feel you could do better once you 'loosen up a bit'. Keep posting here
it difinatly says something. but the ryhming was lost in the begining. and it felt awkward. but i like what it said.