Lost Along the Way

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    my_december

    my_december Well-Known Member

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    I dreamed about it, talked
    about it
    Fought about it, even screamed about
    it
    But all in all just take the fall
    We were lost along the way
    You dare deny it, don't try to
    hide it
    Too scared to fight it, let alone
    defy it
    All in all just take the fall
    We were lost along the way

    When you look at me that way
    It's like I'm looking at myself
    And when you say the things you say
    It's like I'm talking to myself

    But now it's over
    We can see the sun through the rain
    And now we're older
    No more struggle, no more
    constant shame

    You can say you understand
    But I didn't see your footprints in
    the sand
    You can say that you've been there
    But I don't see the marks upon your
    hands

    It's just another way
    To try to make me understand
    It's an open grave
    I don't need you to hold my hand

    But now it's ended
    My pride is missing
    What do you want from me?
    Why can't you see that
    I want to believe it
    Why can't you believe in me?

    I dreamed about it, talked
    about it
    Fought about it, even screamed about
    it
    But all in all just take the fall
    We were lost along the way
    You dare deny it, don't try to
    hide it
    Too scared to fight it, let alone
    defy it
    All in all just take the fall
    We were lost along the way

    Lost along the way...
     
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    Arhaz

    Arhaz ...waiting. LPA Super Member

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    Please tell me that this is turning into a song coz, it's going to be one brilliant song. Love it. The sense of vulnerable maturity is so vivid. You put the point across very directly, yet subtly drowning it in the fluency of the verses. 8/10.
     
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    Scott D

    Scott D Well-Known Member

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    It's pretty good, only a few words don't fit in my opinion, unless the way you say them make them fit. I'm not sure. I'd have to hear you sing it or something lol.
     

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