Left Behind

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    arT saveS

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    Whispering winds spreading disgust,
    Within the dirty dust of our country…
    50 stars of guilt, ruin, lies, hatred and loathing…
    13 roads to destruction, obliteration, annihilation…
    Decaying, disrupting a rhythm…
    A balance to life that can never be revived…
    Meadows of carnage and blood…
    Fields of slaughter and massacre…
    Love, life, laughter…
    All gone.

    We hope…
    We pray…
    We live…
    We die…

    I vote for destruction and famine
    Demise of our foul mother,
    The womb we were born…
    The subtle creator who loves nothing…
    Controlling the minds…
    Spreading the lies…
    As we spin in a spiral,
    Down to the depths of forsaken…
    Hellish creatures nurturing demons…

    We burrow…
    We dig…
    We crawl…
    We plead…

    Bow to the creator
    Separate this withering existence.
    Leaving opportunity behind,
    We walk blindly and boldly…
    Marching…
    Ahead to our ending…
    Death, loss of everything…
    Forever…
    So say your goodbyes.

    We hope, we pray…
    We live and die…
    We burrow and dig…
    We crawl and plead…

    It’s so sad to see…
    You crawling on your knees…
    Pleading…
    Begging…
    For mercy…
    When your creator…
    Your god…
    Has left you…
     
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    fallenangel

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    :eek: wow, this is some powerful shit you've got here!

    what can i say?

    this one was very visual, very bloody but i like it!

    different, but i like when people take a chance to write something different and alittle shocking!

    you really pulled this one off, fab work man! :lol:
     
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    Luke

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    I fucking love this. :D
     
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    arT saveS

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    Thank you both. :)
     
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    El Muerto

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    fucking dark poem
    very good job
    i love the way you did the ending
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl

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    Most definetly.
     
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    D_A_V_I_D

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    AMAZING, but what's new, keep it up ;)
     
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    arT saveS

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    Thank you everyone, I'm glad you all like my writing.
     
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    Arhaz

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    it's got a whole country's voice to it, what could bet better?! :eek:
    great job there!
     
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    Linja

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    True. This is bleeding awesome. I love it. -bows down- This is so bloody powerful...-thinks better and gets back up-
     
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    arT saveS

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    Thank you both very much.
     

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