I haven't posted here in a good long while, but I see nothing's changed Anyway, this song is pretty much about all the people who spite you and try to do everything they can to piss you, and other people, off, and how, eventually, they're going to fall from their high and mighty position as King Asshole. Hence the title of the song, Falling. "Falling" When you start falling, I'll be there to watch you hit the ground When you start falling, I'll be there to see you on your way down When you start falling, just remember you're reaping what you've sown When you start falling, I'll be there to say I told you so You've always liked to bend the rules to make us look like fools And you've carried this shit on way too long I'm tired of bending my knee to your every need And how you act as though nothing's wrong And when you don't get your way we all have to pay I'm going to love seeing you fall When you start falling, I'll not be there to give you a helping hand When you start falling, I know that I just won't give a damn When you start falling, remember that it's a long way down When you start falling, I'll be there to see you hit the ground You like to talk a big game and cause others pain It's always been just like this You like to get things riled and then wonder why We act like we're just a little pissed This time I won't take the blame for your fucking childish games I'm going to see you taking the fall If you were me and if I were you And I put you through what you've put us through Wouldn't you try to take your revenge? Wouldn't you get mad and get back at me? Would you take a good hard look at yourself? Would you try to solve your problems, or would you cause them? Would you put your past up on the shelf? When you saw what you've been doing to us and everyone else It's so far down when you look at the ground from here way up high But it'll take just one little shove and you'll take the plunge And we'll be here to watching you falling... When you've started falling, there's no way to undo what you've done to everyone When you've started falling, can you expect us to believe you're asking for forgiveness? When you've started falling, it's such a long way down, down, down When you've started falling, you can't stop falling till you hit the ground
i like certain bits but i feel that the song lines were a bit too long,i couldnt really get into the song and feel it going through,it was just a large amount of text to read.I could read it quite easily,even though it doest rhyme,which i normally find quite hard. so,mixed feelings on it,i think with some work and tightening some lines it would be awesome
I didn't mind the long lines at all and got right into the song. I agree the piece on a whole might use some tightening, but it is really good. Keep it up, hope to see you round more often. P.S. Also love the meaning behind you songs, so true. GO KARMA.