Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by Phantasm, Jul 20, 2005.

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    Phantasm Well-Known Member

    Oct 6, 2004
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    I haven't posted here in a good long while, but I see nothing's changed :)
    Anyway, this song is pretty much about all the people who spite you and try to do everything they can to piss you, and other people, off, and how, eventually, they're going to fall from their high and mighty position as King Asshole. Hence the title of the song, Falling.


    When you start falling, I'll be there to watch you hit the ground
    When you start falling, I'll be there to see you on your way down
    When you start falling, just remember you're reaping what you've sown
    When you start falling, I'll be there to say I told you so

    You've always liked to bend the rules to make us look like fools
    And you've carried this shit on way too long
    I'm tired of bending my knee to your every need
    And how you act as though nothing's wrong
    And when you don't get your way we all have to pay
    I'm going to love seeing you fall

    When you start falling, I'll not be there to give you a helping hand
    When you start falling, I know that I just won't give a damn
    When you start falling, remember that it's a long way down
    When you start falling, I'll be there to see you hit the ground

    You like to talk a big game and cause others pain
    It's always been just like this
    You like to get things riled and then wonder why
    We act like we're just a little pissed
    This time I won't take the blame for your fucking childish games
    I'm going to see you taking the fall

    If you were me and if I were you
    And I put you through what you've put us through
    Wouldn't you try to take your revenge?
    Wouldn't you get mad and get back at me?
    Would you take a good hard look at yourself?
    Would you try to solve your problems, or would you cause them?
    Would you put your past up on the shelf?
    When you saw what you've been doing to us and everyone else
    It's so far down when you look at the ground from here way up high
    But it'll take just one little shove and you'll take the plunge
    And we'll be here to watching you falling...

    When you've started falling, there's no way to undo what you've done to everyone
    When you've started falling, can you expect us to believe you're asking for forgiveness?
    When you've started falling, it's such a long way down, down, down
    When you've started falling, you can't stop falling till you hit the ground
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    saunderitos Banned

    Feb 28, 2004
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    i like certain bits
    but i feel that the song lines were a bit too long,i couldnt really get into the song and feel it going through,it was just a large amount of text to read.I could read it quite easily,even though it doest rhyme,which i normally find quite hard.

    so,mixed feelings on it,i think with some work and tightening some lines it would be awesome
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    D_A_V_I_D Pure Pwnage

    Feb 17, 2005
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    I didn't mind the long lines at all and got right into the song. I agree the piece on a whole might use some tightening, but it is really good. Keep it up, hope to see you round more often.

    P.S. Also love the meaning behind you songs, so true. GO KARMA.
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    El Muerto

    El Muerto LPA Super Member LPA Super Member

    Mar 16, 2005
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    great work :D

    just great
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    lp_sk8ergurl Well-Known Member

    Oct 13, 2004
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    It's good to experiment.

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