Dear sweetie, so here i am again right back where i started alone and broken again only eyes of an angel can see how much you've always meant to me how many times will i have to say "im sorry" before it loses its meaning... YOU DONT UNDERSTAND! im jelous im broken IM EVERYTHING YOU'VE EVER WANTED im sad im mad IM EVERYTHING YOU'VE EVER HAD! im on my knees..- COUNTING BACKWARDS FROM THREE and im begging you to.. come back to me.. COME BACK TO ME! Dear sweetie, are you home alone tonight? do you need me here? to hold you tight? dont be scared i'll be here for you all day and night this is the part where i wake up and realize everything was all a dream.. IM ALL ALONE AGAIN! im right im wrong IM THE OPPOSITE OF LOVE im bleeding im dying YOUR THE ONLY REASON..- im crying YOUR EVERYTHING TO ME YOUR THE ONLY REASON I BREATH im on my knees..- COUNTING BACKWARDS FROM THREE and im begging you to.. come back to me.. COME BACK TO ME! [With "IM SORRY" repeating in the backround until fade out]
This has really been over-looked. I think you shoudl work on the grammer and such of the piece, but other than that it was great. A few lines seemed a little, amaturish, but everyone learns with experience.