Competition Results

Than was my indiscrete way of you casually revealing what poem was yours.

Now you ruined your chance.

 

do i feel hate?


i wanna know who are all the brilliant poets!!

but in one post alone!!
where is the competition organiser?

 

Nope, I didn't write either of the top two. I wrote number 12.


If we were allowed to say which ones we wrote.

-Formerly known as torn rose

 

Competition review by me.

Disclaimer:
This is just my point of view. Not knowing who wrote most of this poems this is nothing personal either. You don’t have to read it if you don’t feel like it. Have a nice day.


Entry One
Obviously written by a talented female (or male homosexual) writer who was too fucking lazy to take more time and turn this poem into a masterpiece. Well, there’s always a next time.

Entry Two
Too much forced rhyming in my opinion. And why the fuck did you have to mention government? Nonetheless there were some pretty good lines like those about the bus.

Entry Three
"Emotional swords slash my soul…" A great piece of work. It almost made me cry.

Entry Four
Among the top 3 in my opinion. Rhyming doesn’t feel forced at all and it flows nicely. Whoever you are, your poem inspired me to write some lyrics of my own.

Entry Five
"Sunday morning rain is falling…" No, wait… That’s Maroon 5… I felt some raw emotion in this one. Good job

Entry Six
Too dark and too confusing. Not my cup of tea.

Entry Seven
Good job Minus. I respect your work a lot. This is one of your better pieces.

Entry Eight
I had a picture of you in my head trying to dig your way out to the surface, yeah. Pretty good work, yeah.

Entry Nine
The winner. What more can I say. Great imagery. Great message. Congratulations!

Entry 10
I think Adema might want to borrow your lyrics for a song of theirs. No bad but I feel like it’s written by someone who just started writing. Sorry if I’m wrong. B)

Entry Eleven
Masterpiece for sure. Whoever wrote it is a fucking talented writer. The story is amazing in this one. How the fuck did that cross your mind?

Entry Twelve
My favorite. I voted for this one. I kept reading it over and over and over again. Fucking amazing. It just leaves me breathless each time I read it. Fantastic job!

Entry Thirteen
I didn’t like this the first time I read it. But the more I kept reading it the better it sounded in my head. Great metaphors. Great imagery.

Entry Fourteen
I can’t believe I didn’t win. Yes, this is mine. The longest one. If anyone just took time to read the whole thing I’m pretty sure I would win this without any real competition. Just kidding…

Entry Fifteen

And where’s the title?

 

Damnit, double post by accident.

 

Why thankees!

 

OK, i don't care if we're allowed to any more, my poem was 11. Glad people liked it. Thanks to everyone who voted for me. And for those who didn't, if you get a virus in the next week or so, it wasn't me. :whistle:

 

Why thankees! [/b][/quote]
And entire this time I was thinking that you wrote No 9.

Congrats again. Great work.

EDIT: Congrats to you too David!

 

Mali is torn rose and torn rose is Mali?
i'm so confused...

anyway, I'm entry 9.


i would like to thank all those who voted for me for liking my poem and giving me an oppurtunity.
i would also like to thank all those who didn't vote for me for taking time out and actually making this competition happen. if it wasn't for all you voters, we poets would have been no where.
i would also thank all my fellow poets, who did such a wonderful job, that made me nearly give up at one point of time. you guys are just fantastic. i'd like to congratulate all those who won and all those who didn't because all of you were just brilliant none the less.
last but not the least, i would like to cheer for the organisers of this competition, GiriosXeni and Uncle Raj, for having this competition and opening this oppprtunity to us poets. we would like to congratulate you on a job well done.
Hip Hip Hurray!


i feel like i'm standing for Mr. Universe...
thanks everyone

 

LOL, great job Trans........ your a very talented writer and i feel worthly loosing to a poet as great as you. Congraduations to everyone who entered, it was a fantastic compeition.

Thanks Unlce_Raj for taking the bullet and being the middle man.

And thanks GX for organising it and for your generosity with the prizes. Your a legend.

P.S. (Your going now next time :angry: )



EDIT: just realised u changed your name, what's with all the name changes???
Actually, what should i call you?

 

Malika being my name and torn rose being my attempt to register quickly before I left for class. And your poem was great, by the way.

Thanks again.

*WHEW* I voted for 11, so I'm safe.

Congrats to everyone who entered, you all did great!

 

Arhaz...


thanks man, and it's not losing. you were, are and will be superb!

 

don't put such greatness on me,i wrote number 2,it was so shit

i've written way better

 

Oh well, I was hoping people would read it and try to figure it out, there is a very diferent style to it, but it has a good story, I didnt want to write an obvious poem, maybe I gave it to much mystery, next time I will be more straight forward. [I f you guys want, I might post it and explane it in detail]
Anway congrats to entry 9, I voted for you even before the tie breaker thread came about, the poem was awesome!

This is a great idea, we should keep doing it like 4 times a year or something, would be tight!

 

Congrats to TransArhaz/freakolp!

You're poem was the shiznit :chemist:


Mine was 8, innit lid

 

Oh well, I was hoping people would read it and try to figure it out, there is a very diferent style to it, but it has a good story, I didnt want to write an obvious poem, maybe I gave it to much mystery, next time I will be more straight forward. [I f you guys want, I might post it and explane it in detail]
Anway congrats to entry 9, I voted for you even before the tie breaker thread came about, the poem was awesome!

This is a great idea, we should keep doing it like 4 times a year or something, would be tight! [/b][/quote]
Hey, that's just one opinion. You should write what you feel like writing and not what others tell you


Congratulations Arhaz!

@David

There's the end of the world in your poem as well as in mine. Wierd

 

Hey, that's just one opinion. You should write what you feel like writing and not what others tell you


Congratulations Arhaz!

@David

There's the end of the world in your poem as well as in mine. Wierd [/b][/quote]
Weird. Not wierd.

 

man, mali...go join a spelling bee contest. i'd support you by all means.

and thanks all!

 

Well I would like to thank GiriosXeni for thanking me!

Just like to say also....that all entries were with out a doubt well comprised! You all deserve ICE CREAM!

Now we can all just sit and wait for the next one....who knows...we might get more entries....more excitment and more (i cant think of another 'e' word)

But seriously you should all be comended!

Special congratulations to Arhaz (if I can all you that) for such a great entry and also to D_A_V_I_D for coming runner up....also a great entry.

Omg anymore thanks and I'll be all thanked-out!

If I have forgotten anyone....well....THANKS!!!!!!!