<div align=center>LOST IN TIME God, you’re looking beautiful today Even better than you did yesterday But I’m not sure if that’s even possible Because your beauty - it’s unstoppable I often wonder just what you’re doing And I ask myself who I think I’m fooling I can’t hide my love for you but no one sees it I don’t want to be selfish and to myself keep it I want to let the world know how I feel To prove to you that I am for real I want to prove my heart is true to you So then there’ll be nothing left to prove I don’t want to keep it bottled up anymore I just want to scream it out the door Scream it out loud at the top of my lungs And let it roll of the tip of my tongue But there’s something inside holding me back One feature I need that I do lack It prevents me from even saying hello And makes my insides feel like jello It ####s me out of saying what I need And it brings me down to my knees It ruins all chances that I may have had And makes my good days go bad I hate the fact that I’m so damn shy Lately I’ve been asking myself why Why do I have to be like this? Why like this? And I punch all the walls and break my fist I hurt myself because I can’t get you Because I can’t prove my heart is true But I’ll persevere - I know I will Because by then I’ll prove this is real I’ll take you by the hand and walk down the street And introduce you to every person I meet I’ll let the world know of my love for you And how I finally - to you - got through I’m running circles in the mazes deep inside my mind Getting lost losing all I’m trying to find Though I’ll get through the Summer months all right Who knows what will happen that first night Will we become friends and become close? Or will we push apart and become jokes? No, you won’t - but I will for failing And losing you after all the e-mailing Wait, hold on - no - I have to think positive No good comes from thinking negative So I’m going to change my outlook on life I know it’s too early to think of you as my wife But who knows? We may hit it off like no two before ####, I can’t take this anymore I’m just going to talk to you, that’s all there is to it I’m not going to be the one who fell in love and blew it And I may not ever make you mine But I don’t want to get lost in time</div>
Wow . . . . . ~speechless~ . . . . . Will, how did you get so good? A lotta them seem to be about heartbreak . . . . . pain . . . . . sadness . . . . dont't ever stop, Will!!
Bump. C'mon people! More comments please. Your comments are what make me want to keep writing for you all.
I can really relate to this, Will. I love the way you write because you express yourself so articulately. You're a wonderful writer and you have so much to write about, as did I. It's weird, once I finally got a steady girlfriend, I can't write as much as I used to. I guess pain, agony, yearning, and depression are influences for writing. Either way, I haven't found one piece of writing I don't like.
You're right. Once I find someone, my writings will probably be about more made-up stuff instead of what I'm going through.
One girl. Just one. [/b][/quote] May I ask who? It sounds like she's a really amazing girl is you can write so many things about her.
May I ask who? It sounds like she's a really amazing girl is you can write so many things about her. [/b][/quote] Her name's Connie. She's the most amazing girl I've ever seen, but I'm too damn shy to talk to her.
ok, i never come to the writer's cove, but i'm glad i did today because your poems are truly amazing. i really enyjoyed them because not only can i relate to these feelings, you expressed them better than i could in words, and that shows a good writer. you definately have talent, keep writing. and the inspiration for these poems, Connie, makes you write very beautifully. ps- dont let your shyness stop you, its happened to me and ruined everything that i could have had