Anguish

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    SKaRR*oKi

    SKaRR*oKi Everything.Falls.Apart

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    Verse
    They seem to hate you so
    Turns out what you know
    You cannot trust or believe
    You think they are kind
    But all that’s on the the mind
    Is to use you and to deceive
    And the worst part
    Is they nearly took your heart
    And that aint easy to retrieve
    Insomnia stops your sleep
    The pain has cut too deep
    Your blood is staining your sleeve


    Chorus
    Save me, from what you are
    I cant change into this
    IT SEEMS ITS ALREADY TOO LATE
    Help me, find the answers in life
    Too what I should already know
    Give me reason to let go

    Verse
    The smile on your face
    Goes without a trace
    You’ve been left to decide
    To take in a deep breathe
    Stare in the face of death
    Nowhere now you can hide
    Or to run all your life
    Contain all your strife
    Kill yourself from the inside
    Insomnia stops your sleep
    The pain has cut too deep
    Your blood is staining your sleeve


    Chorus
    Save me, from what you are
    I cant change into this
    IT SEEMS ITS ALREADY TOO LATE
    Help me, find the answers in life
    Too what I should already know
    Give me reason to let go

    Bridge
    JUST GIVE ME REASON TO LET GO
    Too much pain
    Locked away
    Left to be felt on another day
    There’s anguish in you
    That you’ve never felt

    I JUST WANT YOU TO HELP ME LET GO

    LET GO


    End Chorus
    You could have saved me, from what you were
    But now I have changed into this
    AND YOUR NOT HERE TO KNOW WHAT I HAVE BECOME
    I realise, there’s no answers in life
    Too what I should already know
    Just one reason to let go


    Bold = Scream Italics = Rap Bold/Italics = Aggresive Rap Normal = Singing
     
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    SKaRR*oKi

    SKaRR*oKi Everything.Falls.Apart

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    Its just something i was working on last night. All comments/views appreciated. Anyone who thinks they can make it better is more than welcome to mess about with the lyrics a bit. I wrote it with the Verse Melody of "Karma Flavored Whiskey" by "Zebrahead" in mind.
     
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    Rohit LP

    Rohit LP The Silent Red

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    nice...specially...d part..

    Bold = Scream Italics = Rap Bold/Italics = Aggresive Rap Normal = Singing

    dat gives d reader an insight on hw d song myt sound...nd a better perspective abt d song...verse1 is reaaly gud
     
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    SKaRR*oKi

    SKaRR*oKi Everything.Falls.Apart

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    thanks :) anything you think i could change? it does seem a bit clumsy and doesnt quite fit in parts :/
     

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