OK, so we've (and I've) put up our lyrics and songs and such. But what I haven't seen yet is a collaborative song, with different verses and choruses by different people. What I want to do is get some of the more talented folks around here and have them add on to this collaborative song, of which I've wrote the first verse: Ever felt like you had something to say But you couldn't get it out so you kept it locked away? Ever feel like you can't get it out no matter what you try So regardless of the consequences you keep it hidden inside? Ever started to speak your mind only to realize that it's not the right time? Ever realized that regardless of what you say no one's gonna listen anyway? Ever tried to speak your piece but nobody's listening? Ever been pushed to the side to the point where the heat from your anger leaves you blistering? Everyone else gets spoken to, except you, and everyone has no clue What you're talking about cause no one bothers to you hear out I feel that way myself sometimes and it's nothing to cry about I can preach all day 'bout this till I'm blue in the face and I already know how things will turn out Feel free to add whatever your mind thinks up, however, it must stay true to what this song is about (read the above, it's pretty self explanatory I think) and the lines must rhyme obviously. Have fun and let's see what you folks can think up!
Ever felt like you had something to say But you couldn't get it out so you kept it locked away? Ever feel like you can't get it out no matter what you try So regardless of the consequences you keep it hidden inside? Ever started to speak your mind only to realize that it's not the right time? Ever realized that regardless of what you say no one's gonna listen anyway? Ever tried to speak your piece but nobody's listening? Ever been pushed to the side to the point where the heat from your anger leaves you blistering? Everyone else gets spoken to, except you, and everyone has no clue What you're talking about cause no one bothers to you hear out I feel that way myself sometimes and it's nothing to cry about I can preach all day 'bout this till I'm blue in the face and I already know how things will turn out Let's leave this all behind, Ever tried to stop the pain? Ever felt like you're all alone? And then you remember it's true, All the lies I told myself and you, That people listened to me, That people liked me, Ever wondered why it's like this? Ever wondered why when you talk you suffer? When the lies come out it's over, Have you had enough of me, When I haven't even begun, To tell you how much pain I suffer, Because everyday is the same and I can't tell you how low I am,
insanitary thoughts colide. what more can i keep away? from the world that shut me out. in a life that passed me by. save me from this race that ignores. and unlock the bolted doors. let me free myself from me. and see what i wish to show the world.
I wrote a rap verse i thought might fit, if you want to use rap, the verse even flows right into the choris In this life ever wonder, lies steel souls between sounds of thunder Amidst the chaos, cutting comments destroy you cover Forced to find shadows, only true friends you find are hollow Neck deep in needles and sorrow, what’s the point when life is shallow These words of mine go unnoticed, forget it, I don’t even exist Their cold stares could slit wrists, so why do I persist to find fake bliss? Behind every breath, between love and hate, open soars insinuate death Choking on the ash of fate, just hoping some day you will feel my wrath Or will I escape, such a desolate place, will lonely souls have a face? Let’s find a place where we belong, now…
Ever felt like you had something to say But you couldn't get it out so you kept it locked away? Ever feel like you can't get it out no matter what you try So regardless of the consequences you keep it hidden inside? Ever started to speak your mind only to realize that it's not the right time? Ever realized that regardless of what you say no one's gonna listen anyway? Ever tried to speak your piece but nobody's listening? Ever been pushed to the side to the point where the heat from your anger leaves you blistering? Everyone else gets spoken to, except you, and everyone has no clue What you're talking about cause no one bothers to you hear out I feel that way myself sometimes and it's nothing to cry about I can preach all day 'bout this till I'm blue in the face and I already know how things will turn out Let's leave this all behind, Ever tried to stop the pain? Ever felt like you're all alone? And then you remember it's true, All the lies I told myself and you, That people listened to me, That people liked me, Ever wondered why it's like this? Ever wondered why when you talk you suffer? When the lies come out it's over, Have you had enough of me, When I haven't even begun, To tell you how much pain I suffer, Because everyday is the same and I can't tell you how low I am, insanitary thought colide. what more can i keep away? from the world that shut me out. in a life that passed me by. save me from this race that ignores. and unlock the bolted doors. let me free myself from me. and see what i wish to show the world. In this life ever wonder, lies steel souls between sounds of thunder Amidst the chaos, cutting comments destroy you cover Forced to find shadows, only true friends you find are hollow Neck deep in needles and sorrow, what’s the point when life is shallow These words of mine go unnoticed, forget it, I don’t even exist Their cold stares could slit wrists, so why do I persist to find fake bliss? Behind every breath, between love and hate, open soars insinuate death Choking on the ash of fate, just hoping some day you will feel my wrath Or will I escape, such a desolate place, will lonely souls have a face? Let’s find a place where we belong, now… Just how many times have I tried to run Away from the pain that I’m feeling inside And how many times have I tried to escape To forget all the problems to forget all the hate I know what I feel and I know it is real I want my head to be clear I want my wounds to be healed I want to get it over I want to be normal But I cannot go on until this game is over Just how many games do I have to play To prove that I’m right and put away all the shame And how many feelings do I have to ignore Now I don’t want to feel anything anymore My entire world is crushing down And the next thing I know I am on the ground It is always the same nothing really changes No matter how hard I try I cannot run away