Elite my ass. We all suck terribly. Just kidding, LPA has some of the best writers on the internet in my honest opinion.
That is some amazing work...you captured the emotions perfectly...I don't know how you did it, all I know it that they're awesome pieces of literature. Please post more of your work.
Stalemate: Why must I have to choose? Wake up! Wake up and see me, For who I really am. I'm no dream woman, Just a hole wanting to be filled. Wish I could kiss you, See you when I do. Picture myself with the rightful ring, Bending on one knee. Just can't wait too long..... I'll say my grace, Then try to embrace... The choice of my heart, This feeling of tarring apart. #### ####, Can't handle it. Down I'm drown in the drain, Wash away what I can, with this simple plan of Denying what I feel. ... So where are we now? Friends without a vow. I'm trying to fix something, That wasn't suppose to be broken at first. Your stupidity, lustful hands... Yerning(sp) for a true love, I can't give it to you, when I can't even... HELP MYSELF! Now here I'll sit alone, Saving you all from breaking. Your hearts, I'm not taking, Wish you could understand... Plead I do with you and myself! Saying what'll become of you, Become of me and us. This play has rerun itself to pieces, And it's time for this season to end. Contract is torn, and I quit this job. I won't pay for this damage, You were all warned! Deaf were your eyes, and blind were your ears. You stepped in, and I'm hoping now, that you won't blame this hurt on me. I fall down anyhow, The shame of being the reaper of hearts. A black lay comes to my eyes, and no more are these lies I hid. So where are we now? Friends without a vow. I'm trying to fix something, That wasn't suppose to be broken at first. Your stupidity, lustful hands... Yerning(sp) for a true love, I can't give it to you, when I can't even... HELP MYSELF! Who's the selfish one, now? Stalemate my love... So, where are we now?
Wow.... I feel so cool o.o *laughs* These are all what I feel and think; just put it down on my journal.
Wow. You...are...AMAZING. So far, I really like "My Dearest Friend", "Soul of Purity", and "Stalemate". Keep posting!
Lustfully Holding: Saw you with a telescope, Wanted to rush into you But was too scared to. Scare you off with these scars, With this death upon my face? Hopefully that's not gonna be, The case... Now with a kiss on my lips, a dream well thought of, And a playful touch. I hope we can think of eachother, of Much. But knowing not how long it can last, If it'll even be something long, Or something that'll soon pass. I'm Too, Into what I want. Am I blinding myself with old flames? Am I covering up sad thoughts With a personal blank? I hope not... I do like what I see, And what I've tasted, Feeling so high and wasted. Damn emotions, And damn these others around me. Hope I can get it to unsurrond me. The smile on my face, Making me feel last place. Yes it's fake, but this is something I can't take. Feeling.... Can't take... Feeling.
Creamy Eyes and Our Future Lives: Why is it that everytime I see your eyes, My heart fills up with aw and dies. Weaken my knees, And make me plead. Kissing you and to hold, Is but dream untold. My stomach hungers, Yet I'm sickened with a thought of you. I love so much that you contorl me, Unwillingly. The eyes that I look into whenever I can, How the years turned you into a man. Beautiful and creamy skin, A touch that I could die; it's a sin. Fall over those eyes your hair, It hides. I can just imagen them saddened... Like you've told me before. Now if only I could reach you, Now if only I see you here... If only I could fly out of my dreams, And see you standing infront of me. Oh please... My garden of envy grows rapidly, Those whom surrond you ungreatfully. They hurt you, You know me... I hunt them and break thee... Now as I lay me down to sleep, Your kind words and eyes I'll keep. If I could I'd stash you in my arms, and keeps you in a box for myself. And you know... you'd like it, If I'd do just that. We love together, Just too far part from eachother. In good time we'll be standing, infront of one another. Just take this time, and use it well... Who knows what'll happen later on? Keep your stone of life smooth, Don't drop it once, Because, you could be dropping me.
Breaker: Pit in my stomach, I tear falling from my eye. I don't know what to be, Nor what to do. This maze is going on for far too long, It's boring me to death, and it hurts too much. The bite marks in my mind stay, Eatting away at my thoughts, My soul and what I thought could be. I'm twitching with pain, This shouldn't be like this. My plan fell like a rock in the air, And no ones going to catch it there. Why must it be so confusing, Not knowing what to think? I'm no longer going to add these pages, This book will come to an end... I'm not following my heart, Just what's smart. Too many times we fell, Too many times we grew. These days are numbered, and it's slowly dieing again. Don't trust to plant another seed, But I can feel the want to see, Another one bloom. Whether I know it be you, Or whether I know it be him. Whether I know it be the one out of my way. I just want a fresh start. I'm sick of living upon what was the past, I want to see how I could live in a positive way. And I know when I told you about the new, It hurt you more than me too. You're not my last resort, I don't even know if I can love you again. It hurts me inside, Makes me cry, To know you feel the pain I once did, And do. I don't even know if I like you, Because I feel sorry for you. Please, please.... Let this all just end, Let me lie in bed, Sleep for the last, And know that the sunset will be my last, Sunrise... Cover me now...
Come on in: Come on... GIVE IN! Never!!!! Bow down, go... Go, bow down... No... Fighting with the inside Fighting with the mind. Come on, exchange Comments, Ass. Silly pig ass, Die... No!!! Scream, and bowing on my knees. Fingers to my ears, A hum in my voice, Drowning out what I can Replacing sleepy thoughts with, His face. A fire inside, And, A silent crying scream in my eyes. What you can see is Scary enough to know. Nailing my brain to a cross, Burning out the devil within. Bow down... Now. Now, bow down..... No... Smash my head into ablivion, A century worth of words in a poem. Singing my songs of woes, Emapthetic pity, and sympathy. Take it back, it's not a worthy gift. And your words are stones of sand. Too many with little purpose; only to stand. SILENT THE VOICE, QUIT YOU FEIND!!! Shut...up... Shut.... Up... SHUT IT NOW!!!! I can't see anything Leave me in peace, and not in pieces. These lines don't cross, I can't cry again...