I'm kinda new at writing raps,so there would be a few bits that i would have to scream.But. here goes Destructible sky Sitting in my room...
:lol: :lol: :lol: This guy is a noob,atleast give us reasons why it sucks. Now,i don't like rap that much,i like a bit.But I thought...
i guess i understand what you mean,but i'm still having trouble seeing the ryhmes ^^ whats the ryhming scheme?
Intermission Set against but don’t know why No questions because we’re shy But it’s always poor who die While riches pre-tend to cry Covering up...
Ben \\m// (w00t)
Linkin Park-Hybrid Theory (with bonus disk)
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yeh,explain please ^^
yes,however, you have to write it very well without ryhmes to make it good ^_^ . You'll just have to understand that not everyone will like...
:lol: your usual awesome writing feenix :lol:
dude its awesome. Reminds me of the book Ringworld,but towards the end I was thinking about corrupted political leaders again :o It's inspired...
:lol: Sorry,not my type. I think the lines where too long, and the lack of ryhmes (typo?) made it hard to read.
:o dude,get some taste,Lord Of the Rings owns Harry Pot-head in every single way. The films of all the books suck,they left out Tom Bombadil :o
I don't go into great detail in this,because i want the imagination to fill in what i left out :P
Sorry David,not overly keen on this one. I just didn't like the overall feel. I'll blame it on the outside influence because i know you are a...
thanks,i've sorted the spelling :P
Rigor Mortis [Rigor Mortis Stops my fun Rigor Mortis Broken bones when I'm done] Chorus Your body's cold,but so beautiful You don't move,so I...
:chemist: awesome (w00t) apart from one bit,and i guess we've all done it here-fear,a bit overused. try something new and exciting for it...
1.LP 2.Rammstein 3.Slipknot 4.Apocalyptica 5.Ronnie James Dio (LoL,im serious) 6.Gang Starr 7.Will Smith i just numbered them cause im weird,in...
its good,a bit too emo for me,but good none the less
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