well i guess this is not as good as your previous poems(nobody can be consitent all the time),but believe me you are extrmely talented who can...
Coool,from the very first poem of yours I had this feeling that you are a good poet and you have proved it right once again,I liked the topioc...
Welcome to the forum where there are many immensly talented poets,the poem is good,and if you want honest commenys from,I guess this work can...
First things first welcome to writers cove(I guess you are a new poet here,as much I have read,this is your first stuff),and about the poem its...
Man what pen do you use,I asked what pen do u use to write such stuff,I guess I will write such great poems with that pen :whistle: ,anyways the...
cool,you seem a better short poem writer than a long one(lol this is just a comment),but the poem has more to say then it seems to say,its...
Well as I have told you before you are talented and you have proved it yet again with this poem,ok this may not be totally overwhelming but...
Yeah I know,and that is the reason why I requested a few more comments,cause the way this thread has evolved with this sucks in the beginning to...
So is this it,is it all the people here had to say about these,well I wanted more(either praise or criticism),so if anybody has to say ANYTHING...
This is crap,totally crap,you are thinking I am telling this to your poem nah,its to the thing that u have written at the end,I wanna tell you...
Hey Neither I am in a mood to start a fight or trouble with anybody here,but in the shadows seems to be behind me in finding mistakes in my...
This is awesome,so little words used and still so much told,I like stuff likie this,but I was wondering it would have been great had you added a...
please write something bad I want to criticise you :rolleyes: ,but you never seem to give a chance for anybody to criticise you,about the poem its...
lol I guess I should be the first person to post my comments for all the poems,coz everybody else tells what I want to everytime :angry: :D just...
better name then I had suggested,its deep,so go ahead name it,thats the best title I guess.
Another poem,an older one of the stuff that I've written and this one is a rhyme free poem :) ,so hope you understand it and like it. Mistake...
Cool,the more I read your stuff the more I am feeling that you are getting better by the day,but I am curious to know about that dedication,is it...
That's hardly a mistake. Meanwhile can also be adapted to mean something similar to : "On the other hand" or is this case "Actually." The...
Wasn't to you. lmao. ahamLP said "he" and "his"...meanwhile, I'm a chic. [/b] :D sorry I didnt know ur sex,but ya I was thinking of using a...
Free form or "free flow" poetry is a form of poetry that invloves little to no rhyming. Free form poetry is possibly the deepest and (to me) the...
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