Ha. That's hilarious. Yeah, I agree completely with USAF.07, we will create our own downfall.
So I'm taking it as this one gets your "wow" factor? I have reached my goal. :P Thank you. :)
It's good, but I do agree with both fallenangel and D_A_V_I_D that it would be better if you extended it. It seems your talented in writing...
I like it. I like the topic, I'd been there before, lost my faith, decided it was impossible, researched it, then researched scientific ways...
New version. Sadness in dark eyes Shadowing fear in my hollow heart This betrayal I am… So lost beside myself Amen, god comes to my side To...
Thank you both. :) I'm adding more right at this moment.
This is worth more than a "good job." This is excellent. I love the entire poem, but my favorite part is... To rolling black clouds, that...
Haha, :lol:. Thank you, this is probably one of my favorites.
Thank you, for the comments and the complements. :)
Ha, so maybe I lied...I love writing. …and we will live with wings To carry ourselves away With golden roads… With hopes and dreams... And we...
Damn good! ;)
Thanks everyone. I don't think I will be writing anymore for quite a while. I've written quite a lot of stuff in the last few weeks, had to get...
Hah! I didn't mean you guys had to go and reply to it. :lol: But thank you, atleast I know people liked it now. :P
Existence, a false beginning A terrible way to live life… I’ll push ahead, scrape the mold… Perfect nature, replace the world… Stop the...
I've written about other topics, but it seems to me everytime I do I don't get any replies, figure no one likes that style, so I go back to what...
Disguised, lost and lonely in subliminal thought… Surrounded, alone in life, clouded and cloaked… Enclosed in this dark mist, hidden within...
Thank you, David. :)
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