I offer sacrifice to the one who has imprisoned me to this body Let me not be kept to this being that I long to escape Give me the strength to...
Besides the fact that a gun doesn't make a so called "blam" sound, plus the over use of that word... Not too bad. :lol:
Well it seems to me most of the you know what you will be doing. That's good, and good luck to all of you. I hope you all lead great lives.
I don't like them that much anymore, welcome nevertheless. :)
Thank you. :D
I like it so far, especially the last line. I hope you keep adding to this. :)
Yeah, I agree, I need to change the title. I will think up something.
Chad Gray - Mudvayne Maynard James Keenan - Tool/APC Otep Shamaya - Otep Amy Lee - Evanescence
Was you listening to Linkin Park when you wrote this? There's a lot of lines that seem copied. Aside from that, it reminds me of a slightly...
That was really good. Haha, It went well to the song I was listening to also...Beethovens Symphony #9.
Dark secrets shadowing burden… Burning holes that enflame my hate… Will you share my pain, please… I’m afraid this is the end my dear I’ve been...
So perfect and flawless Undeniably immaculate Floating high above controlling… So beautiful and elegant Creating controversy Laughing at sadness…...
Thank you everyone. :) @fallenangel: I like your avatar, I don't know if it's new or not, but I just saw it.
I like it a lot more than the other one you had, the only problem I have is that the way I'm playing it, it seems the chords just come out of...
Can you breathe? Or are you suffocating… On the lies… You’ve been spewing. Infectious corruption… Circling and spinning Crashing down upon us…...
Yeah...I don't know why it reminds me of Rugrats, it just does. I actually have what I've written (plus more) of this song on a MIDI program,...
Eh, it's not bad, it reminds me of rugrats though. It doesn't fit the mood of the rest of the song, it's upbeat and happy sounding. Don't take...
Oh, so kind of you. ;) And...if you really want to get into spelling and grammar, is gonna actually a word? Should it not be going to? Edit:...
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Hmm it seems...ODATON IS A LIAR! No, not really...it does seem they took them off the site though. Look what you people who were freaking about...
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