Nice lyrics. (I assume that's what this is.) I enjoyed it overall, but get the feeling that some rhymes were somewhat lacking. They just seemed...
I like this. It opens very strongly, giving the reader a strong feeling of urgency. However, I think a more formal opening would have suited the...
Just don't overdo it, just because you feel you need to ;)
I personally found there was a lack of adjectives. Also, you chose poor breaks, imo. Maybe, if you reworded a few lines, here and there, it would...
If that is everyone's consent, I'll drop it.
I see where you all are coming from, but seeing how you won't comment on pieces that suck, just because you don't want to, is your choice. But...
I personally don't post anymore, because I'm not sure whether people actually read them or not. A comment every once in a while would suffice,...
I personally think that writer's cove is a little...useless nowadays. I find it sad, to see 5-7 poems at a time with absolutely no comments at...
Win! :lol:
His name's Jack, as you've read, I suppose. And who he is? Not sure yet. He kind of happened, while I was trying to find a main character for a...
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Deftones - Eros (sadly, no release date yet.)
I personally don't see a problem with him snapping. We've all snapped in every day situations before. To him, that's an every day situation. He...
Dear Vienna & Hello Seattle = <3
You can't deny he's got talent ;) I dislike a few songs myself, but he can sing pretty damn well, no doubt about it. And his lyrics are...
Am I the only one missing Vocalists like Maynard in the mix? Or even Chris Cornell himself?
The very first Album that I bought for myself, was With Teeth... Nothing to regret.
Thank you very much :hug:
You felt safe and sound, behind your fort walls Sleeping on your altar and along came the arsonist With torches, swords and an armada of...
My heart's already in a million pieces away, it's apart I personally thought that this line was a little cheap. And some rhymes seemed too...
Separate names with a comma.