Glad to see I wasn't the only one having problems :lol:
Slim The Moonman This is a band a friend of mine started recently... They're pretty cool. Go check 'em out. (This is just a side project)
I fucking hate my poem...it's terrible... <__<...sheesh...and the topic wasn't bad, but definately something I could never do properly. Oh...
We probably got it from somewhere else, as well. :) I enjoyed the song rollercoaster...the rest...is pretty much hit or miss.
I guess you're right... I just thought it might be hard for his family...seeing how the award brings back the attention to his...well, not being...
I didn't say he didn't deserve it...just saying, that it doesn't do him any good, since he has passed on. I guess that's just my opinion though.
I personally thought TDK deserved it's award...and heath? Well...seeing how his award can't do him any good, they could've given it to another...
A poem is what it is... you see one thing, someone else sees something different...just the way it works. Doesn't mean you're wrong. Just...
Is Emmure Deathcore? I think they're pretty damn awesome... (I had the song: "When keeping it real goes wrong" in mind) And as for BMTH...they're...
Well, First, I'd like to thank you all for your input. And I usually don't say what a poem should mean, because I like to let people see what...
In a relationship I have one rule, regarding things like that. You may look and fantasize as much as you want. As long as you're not touching...
So you are knocking the idea. I wasn't mad at people dismissing the idea. It was a suggestion, it got shot down, big deal. And I was glad for...
All very intentional to boast it's effect...assuming of course the reader has experienced what I'm talking about...which is pretty common. Oh...
One of the many reasons I started this thread. :lol:
Chelsea smile...Awesome song...favorite song by them. They're pretty great, imo.
I think asking for someone to read and / or crit a poem now and then, can't do any harm. I know from experience, that some even do so. Of...
Good, maybe even great poetry is whatever stirs strong emotions no matter what kind. Will's great at doing that. So basically, I see nothing wrong...
You don't have to rewrite this, if you don't feel up to it...I think keeping old drafts, is a great thing...it helps improve newer pieces. :)
Okay...that's your choice then...like I said before. But just saying whatever doesn't appeal to you is a great deal of help as well. But if you...
Please, do dig a bit deeper, before critisizing. This is not about poisoning...well...maybe in some metaphorical manner, but other than that, I'd...
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