Welome :wave:
Howdy and welcome.
Welcome to the boards.
Weome to the LPA heshboy.
good job.
Sorry can't comment if i can't see anything.
Real artistic.
That's amazing.
That's pretty impressive.
It looks ok.
Seems more like a story than lyrics.
Good job.
Keep up the good work man.
Good lyrics
Awsome!
Your writing is always entertaining.
Well written.
I absolutley loved it! Great job Anya.
I agree you should add more but it looks good so far.
Little mistakes but everything looks good.
Separate names with a comma.