The swearing idea just ruined the whole picture of a great poem. But it's not that bad.
Seems like 21 questions.
That was the best romantic poem I've ever read.
That was long.
I think you can do better but it's ok.
I think you should add another verse but it all turned out good.
I like the title. :)
Good stuff.
Please don't triple post.
Wow, it sounds really good freakolp.
7.5/10
I'll give it a 7/10.
Don't sound that bad.
Really good.
red sun sinks at last into the hills of gold Ghetto Gospel -Tupac ft. Elton John
Island
fast. Would you rather eat pancakes or waffles?
potatos,rice and meatballs.
Hi I'm a fan welcome the the LPA.
LOL! :lol:
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