Not too bad at all David, personally I would have probably liked it longer. More time to go into detail and be creative. But either way, I still...
No they worte Word Up for sure, Another Brick in the Wall I'm not to sure about. [/b] You listen to KoRn but you don't listen to Pink Floyd?
Ok, so the title sucks, sorry, not feeling creative. Anyways, I was in the Is War Worth It? thread not too long ago, and became interested in...
Where did you get those quotes?
I don't really like his music all that much, though some of its ok. But my opinion about him is different, I respect him as a person. His music...
Wow David, nice. It's very creative...the only part I can say I don't like is the last verse, it just wasn't as well written as the rest. But...
Either way, no matter how "small" that 500 billion dollars is, is that not tax payers money? What a waste, not even able to install window covers...
My bad, that wasn't supposed to happen.
Into the cold, damp darkness where the voices roar… Lost within a world, unforgiving and unwilling… Within the experimentation of our own selves…...
I haven't read much of your stuff, atleast that I can think of...but I like this one a lot. I think about 'time' quite a bit, and since this...
Nah. This is not a reason large enough to not be friends. And I do agree with fallenangel, the main reason one writes is because one likes it,...
Thank you both for the replies. I do realize this isn't my best work, oh well. Jeff: I liked how you fit in the "great basslines too" part....
Songs are poems. And as I said, I wasn't trying to come off as being rude. But I completely miss the point of bumping something you've written...
The intro song. You know the one with the banging. It's like 5 seconds long...maybe. The rest of the album sucked.
Not to be rude, but obviously no one liked your poem. It's just a waste of your time to double post, or bump your poem to get replies when it...
Is that halo too tight around your neck? Calm the mind, forget everything… Forsake your beliefs, deliver us salvation… Is that halo too tight...
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Thank you both very much.
Length has nothing to do with the process of writing a good poem. If a person can say exactly what they want to say, powerfully, then more power...
Short, but some of the best from you. Impressive.
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