I like this- simple and straightforward, but I could relate to it. I thought that these were your two best lines. I stay asleep as you stroke...
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love and reason At first we could barely keep our hands off each other But time is a slow venom That causes romance to atrophy Now we can...
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Thanks a lot for the kind feedback. I truly appreciate it.
Heart Breaker You trusted me with your heart And I smashed it to pieces You wanted a soul mate And I wanted to play Casanova I could...
1) Midnight Lovers Two midnight lovers by the lake The moonlight dances across the crystal water I savor the taste from your luscious lips...
Rendezvous Rendezvous We had breakfast in bed And watched the sunrise over the ocean The strawberries, grapes, French toast, and orange...
www.myspace.com/jabble524 This is a link to my myspace page, which has all of my poetry. www.myspace.com/jabble524. If anyone wants to be...
Thirteen Tigers Thanks for the insight, I hadn't thought of that, but you're right, it could work as a chorus. This next one is called Thirteen...
Thanks for the kind words. I truly appreciate it. - Jason
Hello, these are six of my poems, which form a small collection, called Second Circle Romance. If anyone has time, I would love feedback. Hope...
Thanks Thanks to all of you who took the time to read my poetry. I see that it got a good amount of views. Take care. - Jabble
Kisses Indicate I can leave the place where time stops Just outside reality I can leave the place where time stops Material paradise...
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