R.A.P(Retards attempting poetry) Is this of relevance, But I’m malevolent writin’ rhymes Of all kinds but I am decadent My mind is on fire, but I’m no liar, turn your back on me and I’ll ride ya 50 cent, should go repent, commitin’ sins with his pen and to him that was lent Shot 9 times don’t mean you’ whack Just that everybody thinks you’re a twat this is my first verse of my trash talk rap i hope you like it
I like it because you were talking trash on 50. Please finish of this rap by talking crap on the rest of G-Unit. I hate them. B)
Trash talk rap is great, especially against G-Unit. They are just dumb, their clothes are dumb, and everything about them is dumb. B)
I really hope this rap isn't your final draft 'Cuz the rhyming is off and your humor really daft I'm sorry; whack don't rhyme with twat So I guess you're not as good at R.A.P as you thought This rap contains no relevance; it just shows you ignorant Especially when you tried so hard to diss 50 Cent Hate to tell you that with this you won't get far Unless you can compare to Game's 300 bars This rap is trashy talk, but I don't have to say it You typed as much and that's like signing an affidavit R.A.P. should R.I.P and THAT you'll mourn Because what R.A.P. means is gonna get you warned. That was fun.
saunderitos you better make a come back, because this guy just dissed not only your rap. He made fun of it, and you. This is a slap in the face and I expect you to come back at him hitting hard.
this thread could be an online rap stage contest...you know those sub urban rap wars?... "Step up to the microphone...who can rock a rhyme like this, bring it to you every time like this...step step up step step up step up...."
I really hope this rap isn't your final draft 'Cuz the rhyming is off and your humor really daft I'm sorry; whack don't rhyme with twat So I guess you're not as good at R.A.P as you thought This rap contains no relevance; it just shows you ignorant Especially when you tried so hard to diss 50 Cent Hate to tell you that with this you won't get far Unless you can compare to Game's 300 bars This rap is trashy talk, but I don't have to say it You typed as much and that's like signing an affidavit R.A.P. should R.I.P and THAT you'll mourn Because what R.A.P. means is gonna get you warned. That was fun. [/b][/quote] i didnt know you were rapping when i first read it *smack numnut* anyway, i've never battled before.heregoes Final? nah, its the beggining,but when i'm finished I'm the one be grinnin' Whack and twat ryhme where i come from At that place,where I'm someone You lack rythm(typo?)and ryhme and flow I say that I don't,but it's something I know You wanna battle,come here and you bring it Like shit in a bag,ill pick it and fling it that's all i got for the moment
AHAHA ill keep score....1 point saunderitos, 0 Minus Xero Im sorry but that reply kicks the shit out of Minus Xero's one..... You wanna battle,come here and you bring it Like shit in a bag,ill pick it and fling it Thats da shit man!!! (literally)
I was actually just being stupid BUUUT... I also think everyone should vote at the END of the battle to make life a lot easier. I can't believe I'm hearing all of this shit It sounds like you're stuck in a Will Smith hit Gettin' jiggy wit' it, this ain't your style Cuz I'm bring what you want like Girls Gone Wild You're really mild, I don't think you're gettin' it Right now I'm on my second pop reference That you didn't get, boy you're too young Like a baby in a diaper trying to hold a gun You're immature, grow up, or it's the slammer But maybe there you'll learn about spelling and grammar So you can steadily test me but you'll never best me Hit you in the heart until you get an epilepsy Take your shit in a bag and pick it and fling it But I'm a loaded god complex, cock it and pull it. References for the unknowing/curious: Will Smith - Gettin' Jiggy Wit' It Girls Gone Wild Fallout Boy - Sugar, We're Going Down EDIT: Oh, and also, just out of my grammar nazi attitude ( ), it's rhythm and rhyme. Those are the correct ways to spell those words.
I was actually just being stupid BUUUT... I also think everyone should vote at the END of the battle to make life a lot easier. I can't believe I'm hearing all of this shit It sounds like you're stuck in a Will Smith hit Gettin' jiggy wit' it, this ain't your style Cuz I'm bring what you want like Girls Gone Wild You're really mild, I don't think you're gettin' it Right now I'm on my second pop reference That you didn't get, boy you're too young Like a baby in a diaper trying to hold a gun You're immature, grow up, or it's the slammer But maybe there you'll learn about spelling and grammar So you can steadily test me but you'll never best me Hit you in the heart until you get an epilepsy Take your shit in a bag and pick it and fling it But I'm a loaded god complex, cock it and pull it. References for the unknowing/curious: Will Smith - Gettin' Jiggy Wit' It Girls Gone Wild Fallout Boy - Sugar, We're Going Down EDIT: Oh, and also, just out of my grammar nazi attitude ( ), it's rhythm and rhyme. Those are the correct ways to spell those words. [/b][/quote] Your last reply you know it had me in shock Cock it and pull it,you play with what? You try and write well ,but you can't make it then you insult me,so you can try and fake it I write it good,so I write it short Your rhymes belong in a gay tennis court You still sure you wanna carry on? Tick tock tick tock lyrical rhyme bomb thanks ether by the way
short and once again kick arse.....Minus Xero you better pull out something good shit or....this battle is won.... not to say that Minus Xero's isnt good, its just being shotgunned on this such day
This is a R.A.P battle? Bitches I travel all around the world gathering cattle together Abra Kadvara I arrived here in the writer cove, back touring the globe, coming to taking back my area code (YaNa)Listen up you're rymes are dry, and causing babies to cry, so ante up the flow Kids I told you, Yana is back on the corner, and taking back the block, putting everyone in shock But you know why you're raps are short, Its only so you wont get hurt But you have already been burnt, I am representing the O.C kid dont front I know you just want to taugnt, but you cant see me If yo find me, I'll be sure to make bleed, and bow down on your knees I am running laps around you so breezy, this shit is seems so easy So Don't take this R.A.P too personally, though it hurts I am not here to seem like a jerk
Seeing as I don't rap for a living... or rather, rap in general, I'm going to bow out. I was just trying to be funny there so yeah.