This poem, well it's not my best but I haven't written good poem in a while. Here it is... It's not the same, is it? Desperate to grasp onto memories already past Gathering the moments the have no meaning Who am I? No one forgotten No one remembered insignifant enough for no one to care It's gone The hope the was our future Trapped in another picture Another picture Another photograph Would it make a difference To leave an imprint on a statue? To make a moment mine? Hoping to be immortalized in history Wishing I was there in the beginning Holding on when it's already gone Letting go when you're still holding on It's gone The hope the was our future Trapped in another picture Another picture Another photograph It's not the same, is it? We can't g oback to the way things were I don't want to move on I'd rather be trapped In another picture In another photograph
This is great. The emotion within the poem really comes out well. I really love, I can relate to it alot too. You're really talented!