Another Photograph

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    adelleda

    adelleda Well-Known Member

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    This poem, well it's not my best but I haven't written good poem in a while. Here it is...

    It's not the same, is it?
    Desperate to grasp onto memories already past
    Gathering the moments the have no meaning
    Who am I?
    No one forgotten
    No one remembered
    insignifant enough for no one to care

    It's gone
    The hope the was our future
    Trapped in another picture
    Another picture
    Another photograph

    Would it make a difference
    To leave an imprint on a statue?
    To make a moment mine?
    Hoping to be immortalized in history
    Wishing I was there in the beginning
    Holding on when it's already gone
    Letting go when you're still holding on

    It's gone
    The hope the was our future
    Trapped in another picture
    Another picture
    Another photograph

    It's not the same, is it?
    We can't g oback to the way things were
    I don't want to move on
    I'd rather be trapped
    In another picture
    In another photograph
     
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    esaul17

    esaul17 antichrist

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    Great poem/song. Really deep and meaningful.

    I wish I could write like that...
     
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    Madi

    Madi Well-Known Member

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    This is great. The emotion within the poem really comes out well. I really love, I can relate to it alot too. You're really talented!
     

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