I loved that! totally about me, at all times, thnx, I'm going to camp in two day's and I'm going to bring those words with me, it'll help!
That is very deep, and personal, but I'm glad it seemed as though you put alot of effort into it, which you probably did! I love it! 8/10
I love ur writing soooooo much, would you mind if I tried putting up a album/lyric book up on the LPA? I think its a great idea. Copying is a form...
Hi, this is a poem I wrote, please, tell me what you think.
The glass ring sits on my finger,
yes, the one next to my pinkie,
on the hand of...
I always think, the shorter, the more descriptive! If you think about it, it's mostly true! I love it, and this is very odd b/c last night, I was...
I totally love the song. It's great cuz it reminds me of something happening to me right now. but anyway, a good title would be Drifting Apart.
I can't cope with all my fears,
I try to scream and nobody hears,
left in the dark, cold and alone,
looking for somewhere to call home,...
If someone wrote something this romantic for me, I'd die!!!! no one likes me, so somethin like this would be quite a shock!!! Oh well, I don't...
I love this, I can totally relate, if this was written because of personal experience, if not, I didn't say anything!!!! :whistle: but great...
These are really funny. :P Hey how about:
Someone paralyzed laying one the ground after falling off their weelchair or whatever: I can't feel,...
I like Hybrid Theory EP, I love the face that mike drew and then the evil version that Joe drew of it next to it!!! :mike: :joe:
my blood drips from the wound,
as it falls to the ground,
i feel like im cucooned,
in a place with no sound,
and soon I'll break free,
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