No Sorrow

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  1. Anya

    Anya Lost LPA Super VIP

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    I'm really really mad.. perfect time to write then..

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    -No Sorrow-

    you won't even listen
    tears fall- but once they hit the ground
    there's no turning back
    no sympathy evident in your voice..
    pools of blood spill from these eyes
    swallowing- savoring every shed that falls..
    hoping that one will land softly
    and reveal inside what pain you caused me
     
  2. Will

    Will bread crumbs & white stones LPA Addicted VIP

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    That's awesome, Anya. Straight to the point. I like it. 9/10.
     
  3. Andrea

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    :hugz:

    Very good. I like it also.
     
  4. Anya

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    Thanks guys! :D
     

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