Anthem of Revolution

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  1. a life in ashes

    a life in ashes mercury summer

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    Anthem of Revolution

    I’m looking out of the window,
    Lost in my past,
    As the innocent suffer,
    How can it be fair,
    It’s not fair,

    Until the day we burn it,
    Until the day we change it,
    This system will fail,
    Today is our revolution,

    I don’t learn my lessons,
    Not that you ever care,
    They never make a difference,
    Am I wasting my time,
    It’s a waste of time,

    Until the day we burn it,
    Until the day we change it,
    This system will fail,
    Today is our revolution,

    We need to burn it,
    We need to change it,
    This system has failed,
    Our anthem of revolution,

    Until the day we burn it,
    Until the day we change it,
    This system will fail,
    Today is our revolution,

    I’m gonna burn it,
    You’re gonna burn it,
    Today is our revolution.







    thoughts please...
     
  2. fallenangel

    fallenangel Well-Known Member

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    this was really good! ^_^

    very political, which i can't write about cause i am afraid of looking stupid!
    but this was different and bold.
    keep it up, i would love to see more stuff like this!
     
  3. Muri

    Muri It never ends.

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    I agree 101%. :D
     
  4. ahamLP

    ahamLP Well-Known Member

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    Great,the topic you have chosen is one which is less chosen by people here to write on,you have come with a poem, and that too a really good poem I liked it,and I liked the title too it suits the poem very well,keep the good work coming.
     
  5. D_A_V_I_D

    D_A_V_I_D Pure Pwnage

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    Totaly agree.

    A topic not often chosen because it is a bit of a don't go there topic. But you did a great job.
     
  6. lp_sk8ergurl

    lp_sk8ergurl Well-Known Member

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    Nice title.
     

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