Well basically I haven't written some rap lyrics in a long long time so I decided to after listening to Jay-Z a few times I think these are my best rap lyrics aswell actually. I also wrote them this morning "Youthfull Ignorance" Do you remember when you were youthfull, And didn't have a clue at all? You could have been everything, But you didn't wanna try... *Robbie Williams, yeah that's right RW, clip thingy* Daddy where's the sun gone from the sky? What did we do wrong, why did it die? And all the grown-ups say, "Sorry kid's we got no reply." *End Robbie Williams clip thingy* Now everybody, back on the scene, I'm not tryna be mean, just tryna be me, 'Cause now I'm, full throttling to get to the back, No one's in front of me, it's just a clear path, Everyone else, kinda just fell out the way, Full of broken dreams, what more can you say? Remember when everything was so far away, You just couldn't get to it at the end of the day, And all the dreams and the jobs were just thrown in your face, The faces and places spread by different races, It became so hard to think about the past, 'Cause the past is the past, and you can't make it last, So now we're both older but not nearly enough, But it seems like everything is not nearly as rough, We were just young kids tryin' to act tough, But that tough was just enough to make you a puff, And you know that we were spreadin' so much love, And it was thrown right back with a giant shove, Why does nobody want for me to care for them? I thought love was meant to be one of those gems... Do you remember when you were youthfull, And didn't have a clue at all? You could have been everything, But you didn't wanna try... *Robbie Williams clip thingy* Daddy where's the sun gone from the sky? What did we do wrong, why did it die? And all the grown-ups say, "Sorry kid's we got no reply." *End Robbie Williams clip thingy* Now you're holding onto your San Miguel, Like you'd hold onto Sarah Michelle, And that's Gellar can anybody get close? She can sing, she can act, she can wear tight clothes, But you're never gonna get a girl as famous as that, You can't choke on your shit, definitely can't rap, So put your hands together, like you're ready for combat, But you can't 'cause you're soaked like a fucking bath mat. Do you remember when you were youthfull, And didn't have a clue at all? You could have been everything, But you didn't wanna try... *Robbie Williams clip thingy* Daddy where's the sun gone from the sky? What did we do wrong, why did it die? And all the grown-ups say, "Sorry kid's we got no reply." *End Robbie Williams clip thingy* Now stand back up like you're okay man, 'Cause we all know you're not but we know you can, So daydreamin' of happiness is past just dreamin', And dreamin' of leavin' is thought conceivin', But now you're thinkin' up all different meanings, Different reasons for why she's leaving, There's only one reason and that's 'cause you're fucked up, You're shouting out loud to your homies, "What's sup?" But the kids are wondering why the sun's gone from the sky, And wondering why the sun had to die, But you're sitting there inside yourself lookin' like a spy, It's too bad for you that you've got no reply. Do you remember when you were youthfull, And didn't have a clue at all? You could have been everything, But you didn't wanna try... *Robbie Williams clip thingy* Daddy where's the sun gone from the sky? What did we do wrong, why did it die? And all the grown-ups say, "Sorry kid's we got no reply." *End Robbie Williams clip thingy*
Holy hell marys! 10/10 dude that is the best set of lyrics I've ever seen,kinda reminds me of a set of my own lyrics.Definatly your best work yet!
Thanks for the comments, they're appreciated Anyone got any ideas on how I could perhaps enhance this style of writing?
I have an idea on how you can enhance it;Give it to me [/b][/quote] I'm working on some more rap lyrics now aswell