You're In Love (So Am I)

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    Dedicated

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    Any replies are welcome :) Like, which you think is better, etc. Thankies :)

    "You're In Love (So Am I)"

    I think your bleach blonde hair has somehow fucked my brain,
    But everytime you talk to me you say his name,
    I swear I'll always remember "VP"
    'Cause violence equals passion, between you and me.

    Now, now, now,
    You've fallen in love,
    With someone else,
    Now, now, now,
    Now, now, now,
    You've fallen in love.

    I'm refusing to wear my glasses so that I can't see your face now,
    'Cause everytime I do it's like you're taunting me,
    I'll always remember the way that you looked at me,
    That one night in the park when we stared up at the stars we couldn't see.

    Now, now, now,
    You've fallen in love,
    With someone else,
    Now, now, now,
    Now, now, now,
    You've fallen in love.

    Look at this little complication,
    Which is overwhelming my concentration,
    She has a boyfriend but he's not a prick,
    To make matters worse, she's in love with him.

    Now, now, now,
    You've fallen in love,
    With someone else,
    Now, now, now,
    Now, now, now,
    You've fallen in love.



    "Contra-We're-Different-But-The-Same-Dictions"

    There you go again,
    Another argument you're lost yourself in,
    And you've lost your concentration,
    With your fucking contradictions,
    Saying "You will not tell anyone,
    What they will or will not do."

    You cannot do this,
    You will not do that,
    Your weapon of choice,
    Your contradictions, twat.

    Since when did the world care?
    'Cause I don't, I don't even stare,
    Actions unforgivable,
    You're so hypocritical,
    I bet you were perfect,
    Or better yet, no I don't.

    You cannot do this,
    You will not do that,
    Your weapon of choice,
    Your contradictions, twat.

    This pen is my gun,
    Put to your head,
    And pull the trigger,
    Will you end up dead?
    This pen is my gun,
    Put to your head,
    And pull the trigger,
    Will you end up dead?
     
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    Linja

    Linja Good. Be magnanimous. Über Member

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    These are both awesome. But there's one problem. It's argument, not arguement.
     
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    .epitome.of.irony.

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    i like your use of resounding words.

    it's great.
     
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    Dedicated

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    Whoops xD My bad.



    Thanks for the comments :)
     
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    Friskey™

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    Nice. To the point and catchy. Awesome as always ^_^
     
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    *MoOn*

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    both are great ^_^ i like the 2nd one much, keep on that my friend ;) :thumbsup:
     
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    Dedicated

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    Thanks alot for the comments :D
     
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    Luke

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    You're welcome...oh wait I havn't commented on this :lol:

    They're both pretty good, you're finding your way out of the forest :lol:
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl

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    Awsome work.

    P.S- Im not in love :)
     

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