Your broken wings

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    Adam

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    Your broken wings

    Do you ever feel like you need to destroy everything around you?
    No ones left but still you turn around to see who’s behind you
    It’s a strange feeling, but eventually it becomes something you believe in
    You wish some one else felt the same you wish you weren’t alone
    There’s a part of you that wants to give everyone else your disease
    Just so you can see we will feel the same…

    Lets runaway to a place that they will never find
    Lets start over and create a new life
    Because tonight is a night for a new beginning
    Tonight is the last we will spend together unless we mend your broken wings
    Come with me, I will be your guide when the lights go out
    Come with me, take my hand and I will show the way

    These words I speak they feel so right
    Until you find out whom I’m writing about
    Then you might love me/ then you might hate me
    I wish you’d just tell me… how you feel
    I will always be here for you even if you don’t want me
    You’ll always be a part of me even if I’m not in you
     
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    Link04

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    Kudos for free verse! ^_^ Very nice, I like it.
     
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    Adam

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    Thanx ^_^
     
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    Thats sick dude,very well done (w00t) :) ;)
     
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    whoa! :eek:
     
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    Thanx for the comments everyone ^_^
     
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    Your broken wings (part 2)

    Tonight is a night for a new beginning
    Tonight is the last we will spend together unless we mend your broken wings
    But I can only help if you still have faith in me
    You have to trust in more than your eyes can see
    But if had already figured me out you would've taken my hand by now
    Come with me, I will protect you from the enemy

    My heart has stop beating, my wounds stopped bleeding
    My life and love are dead through suicide
    Can you save me, you're all that I want to be
    Can you save me, you're the only one who truely believes me

    The way I feel can't be put into words
    I feel like I've been this way
    The more days pass, the more I see this is more than fantasy
    I known we belong together
    We'll mend your broken wings and fly forever
     
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    Luke

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    Part 2 is also sick (w00t) :) ;)
     
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    Thank you ^_^
     
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    Awesome.

    I especially loved that verse. Its just very truthful. Wicked B)
     
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    Wow that's good ^_^

    I love it, espechially this part, it reminds me of my bestfriend Anya lol

    These words I speak they feel so right
    Until you find out whom I’m writing about
    Then you might love me/ then you might hate me
    I wish you’d just tell me… how you feel
    I will always be here for you even if you don’t want me
    You’ll always be a part of me even if I’m not in you
     
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    Adam

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    Thanx for comment everyone ^_^
     

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