You decieved me.

Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by Muri, Apr 15, 2005.

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    Muri

    Muri It never ends.

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    I want to move on,
    I want to leave.
    But no matter what I do,
    I can't forget you,
    I keep breaking.
    Why did you have to do this,
    why did you have to play with my mind,
    why did you decieve me?

    I can't even hate you,
    you just linger here,
    and I keep torturing myself.
    So who's fault was it?

    Once we were so perfect,
    Did I do something wrong?
    Or did you just got bored with me?
    Was I just your little toy?
    A girl to spend some time with?

    I hate this,
    I know you left me,
    lied to me.
    And I can't stop thinking about you.
    Bleeding inside,
    I failed to cure the wounds you made.

    Hello,again. :)
     
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    MeLiS_

    MeLiS_ Well-Known Member

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    i'm repeating, that one is awesome!! :lol:

    by the way, cool title.. :p
     
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    Arhaz

    Arhaz ...waiting. LPA Super Member

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    i liked the beginning a lot, but personally, i think it ended abruptly.
    i like the title too... ^_^
     
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    fallenangel

    fallenangel Well-Known Member

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    like wise. i think if you worked on the ending, maybe putting one other verse on it, it would be really good.
     

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