Yet another untitled poem.

Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by LP_Freak_2735, Jan 1, 2005.

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    LP_Freak_2735

    LP_Freak_2735 Well-Known Member

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    Why does everybody care
    so much about what is there
    Why does everybody need to know
    If someone else thinks they can glow
    Why does someone have to see
    If I wear my heart on my sleeve
    Why does anyone else need to be
    anything at all like me
    why does the world label me
    like campbell's soup
    If they don't know how low
    I won't stoop.
    How come everybody else can't see
    The person that is inside of me.
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    not my personal favorite, but some friends think its good.
     
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    ChazyChaz_gurl13

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    its cool. i like it :D
     
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    Kate

    Kate beat me senseless LPA Super Member

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    August 7th is my birthday, but I think you've got a good idea in that poem. Fix up the rhythm and it could be great.
     

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