wounded

this is a poem that i wrote like a week ago its called wounded:

scarred inside from all the years of pain
theres nothing left my feelings have been drained
taken from heart, taken from soul
losing all my self control
holding it in til its to hard to bear
hurting every day and all you do is stare
you push me away when i run to you
then you blame me when i yell at you
you say i have to be perfect to earn your love
but should a child have to earn love?
is that real, do you care? do you feel?
you dont even know how much my heart is burning
thoughts in my head keep churning and churning
thoughts of you yelling, cursing, and blame
when will i find peace to wash away the shame
when will you let me in, into your heart of stone
when will the tension be lifted as i enter our home
None will ever know
But somewhere beneath all the lies
I forgive you for not whiping the tears from my eyes
And when i leave it will not be ok
cuz even when im gone the wounds will remain

 

That's really good. Keep up the good work.

 

that's cool, great job!

 

thanks i know their depressing but as my dad says their just human feelings and hes right...but im glad that you like them

 

that's very powerful and very good!!!! love it!!