With Doubt (Without)

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    minusxerø

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    Watching cars pass by
    While I stand still
    I fade the city lights
    Close my eyes
    To the world
    And as hard as I might

    I can't shake away
    These tremors
    This feeling of unease
    The revelation
    Hits me
    And I fall to my knees

    Without a heart
    Without a soul
    A place to call my own
    Without a bed
    Without a room
    A place that I'd call home

    I stumble forward
    Without a cause
    My feet carry on
    While my body
    And my strength remains
    My will to live has gone

    Without my will
    Who needs strength?
    Why do what I can do?
    Who needs the power
    To carry on
    When you have nowhere
    To carry on to.
     
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    Will

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    Minus Xero Kayce, that was excellent. I loved it.
     
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    minusxerø

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    Thanks.

    It's mainly just a stress-release right now. So much shit is going on and I can't straight up smack anyone (yet), so I write.

    I feel somewhat like what is written here.
     
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    minusxerø

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    Double post but I added a bit.
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    Watching cars pass by
    While I stand still
    I fade the city lights
    Close my eyes
    To the world
    And as hard as I might

    I can't shake away
    These tremors
    This feeling of unease
    The revelation
    Hits me
    And I fall to my knees

    Without a heart
    Without a soul
    Someone to call my own
    Without a bed
    Without a room
    A place that I'd call home

    I stumble forward
    Without a cause
    My feet carry on
    While my body
    And my strength remains
    My will to live has gone

    Without my will
    Who needs strength?
    Why do what I can do?
    Who needs the power
    To carry on
    When you have nowhere
    To carry on to.

    I walk in circles
    Nowhere to go
    An endless march today
    Forever on
    I'll walk this path
    Walk the pain away

    It's pointless to
    Act unlike
    How I feel in my core
    When darkness comes
    And I have noone
    To love or care for.

    Nothing or noone
    I have both
    Sadness and desperation on high
    Of life and love
    And what I need
    I have enough to get by

    So I'll try to endure
    For the sake of me
    And what I live without
    And live with what
    I hate the most
    Trapped here with doubt

    With me.
     
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    El Muerto

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    Great job man. The added parts are ok but not as good as the original
     
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    minusxerø

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    I guess I should have wrote those parts when I was still homeless. :lol:
     

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