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    my_december

    my_december Well-Known Member

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    When

    When nothing feels right
    When it's all a waste
    And you can't decide how much
    more to take
    When you fall inside and you
    lose sight of the light
    When you're afraid to crawl
    but too scared to fight
    When you're looking down the hole
    To see how far you'd fall
    When you count your tears to
    keep track of it all

    It's like how you can't look anyone in the face
    It's like how you always turn and walk away
    It's when you're lost inside yourself, calling out for help
    But no one knows cause you don't say a thing

    It's the sun disappearing from the sky
    It's the veil descending and covering your
    eyes
    And you can't relate to anything and you
    always seem so alone
    It's when you've never left your room
    and you're so far from home
    It's another day just like the rest
    When you wake up and you don't know whether
    you're cursed or blessed
    It's when all your reasons are tied up in rhymes
    You can't get out your meaning and you feel
    like you're wasting your time

    It's like how you're always looking at the ground
    It's like how everyone is talking to you and you don't
    hear the sound
    It's when the wall is in your face and you can't look
    away
    When you know you've hit the bottom and it's time
    to fade or stay
     
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    Theazninvasion68

    Theazninvasion68 It's like blood to a vampire, our tragic desire. LPA Super VIP

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    This is probably about depression or sadness, along with anxiety. I like this poem.

    Very descriptive on how it is such. Stuck between two, and withdrawing away from the anxiety within.

    Good work :)
     
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    my_december

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    Yes, it's about depression. Once again, thank you for your kind words :) Much appreciated.
     

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