When you left

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    don't do this

    don't do this Well-Known Member

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    Watching you go by
    it makes me fall down and cry
    you'll never look back upon this
    but the emotions will always persist

    You'll never want to know
    why this happened to us
    the daggers that tore through my body
    and the love that turned to rust

    You think the pain gratifies me
    you think this keeps me alive
    but what you fail to see
    is that it tears me from the inside

    I'm just as desolate as you are
    I'm just as divested as you
    but I'm not as fervent as you doubt
    to show the feelings out

    I can live with the hatred
    keep it clandestine
    I can seal all my sorrows
    and embrace death when I die

    I'll go to hell and burn
    the flesh will peel off the bone
    but atleast I'll be away from here..
    you'll be here...
    and still be alone....



    what do you think guys?
     
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    Messy Marj

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    Frustration = Awesome! (w00t)

    I love it, keep on writing!
     
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    Madi

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    Its brilliant, I just love it. Keep up the good work.
     
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    don't do this

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    thanks mar n madi :)
     
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    don't do this

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    She
    She walked alone in the darkness
    in the lonely frightful street
    and the gush of wind that soon came along
    swept her off her feet

    She didn't know where it would take her
    she slowly writhed in pain
    but it didn't make a difference now
    her life had made her insane

    It took her back in time
    to flowers with morning dew
    it showed her the memories
    in which she once grew

    It showed her realise that
    she had to much she couldn't lose
    it showed her the days she didn't even know how to cry
    the days that had gone by

    She saw herself as she would
    in a mirror back in time
    she was too shocked to see
    wasn't being happy a crime?

    She lived in the pain for too long
    all the feelings were gone
    but it wasn't too late to realise that
    she'd have to carry on

    So now....she'll live
    but for whom...she'll never know...
     
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    Messy Marj

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    That's also a nice one! ^_^
    Keep it up!
     

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