When She Cries

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    Will

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    "When She Cries"

    That day haunts me so much
    And I can still remember the look on her face
    When she stopped right in front of me
    It was as if she was suspended in time
    I don’t know what she was thinking
    And I’ll probably never find out
    I just wish that I would’ve stopped to talk
    Instead of walking right past her
    That day is so vivid in my mind
    And it’s always going to haunt me
    Always

    When she cries
    I’ll hug and hold her
    Hug her tight
    And just console her
    When she cries
    I’ll stand beside her
    Hug her tight
    And just confide her

    Now that she’s found someone
    I’ve never seen her happier before
    It’s almost as if he’s completed her life
    Something that I’ll never be able to do
    I wasted my time and I wasted hers
    And I feel as though I’ve lost something
    A part of my heart has been ripped away
    She’s taken now and I can do nothing
    Jealousy latches itself onto my heart
    And it’s always going to haunt me
    Always

    When she cries
    I’ll hug and hold her
    Hug her tight
    And just console her
    When she cries
    I’ll stand beside her
    Hug her tight
    And just confide her

    When she cries
    I’ll hug and hold her
    Hug her tight
    And just console her
    When she cries
    I’ll stand beside her
    Hug her tight
    And just confide her

    The silence here is slowly breaking
    I still can’t keep myself from shaking
    I’d like to think I’m not a quitter
    But cruel intentions make me bitter
    The look in her eyes makes me crazy
    The light around is seeming hazy
    His face stands out whenever it’s there
    I have to pretend that I don’t care
    I see her with him and it kills me
    I wish it was her that would thrill me
    The stars around are crying lonely
    I just wish that she would show me
    Faceless exemption breaks inside her
    And I just wish that I could find her
    Take the brick wall and throw it away
    Just so that I’d be able to say
    I wish it was me there on her arm
    To keep her away from the harm
    Hold her tight and dry all her tears
    Because she takes away all my fears
    Fears from a heart so cold and sad
    "Pick me up now, I need you so bad"

    When she cries
    I’ll hug and hold her
    Hug her tight
    And just console her
    When she cries
    I’ll stand beside her
    Hug her tight
    And just confide her

    When she cries
    I’ll hug and hold her
    Hug her tight
    And just console her
    When she cries
    I’ll stand beside her
    Hug her tight
    And just confide her

    When she cries
    I’ll hug and hold her
    Hug her tight
    And just console her
    When she cries
    I’ll stand beside her
    Hug her tight
    And just confide her

    When she cries
    I’ll hug and hold her
    Hug her tight
    And just console her
    When she cries
    I’ll stand beside her
    Hug her tight
    And just confide her
     
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    Wow. Just, wow. :eek:

    Excellent job, Will. I hope you'll be okay. :hugz:
     
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    Messy Marj

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    I also hope you're okay :hugz:
    That was great.
     
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    :'(
     
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    ....Wow........

    Awesome yet again Will. I particularly like the last verse
     
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    Will

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    Thanks everyone. :)
     
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    Omar

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    That was really really really good ^_^

    Just curious, have you saved all the work you've written? You must have hundreds by now.
     

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