What you've done (No more sorrow)

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    The Emptiness Machine

    The Emptiness Machine Out of the abyss. LPA Über VIP

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    I don't know. When listening to No More sorrow I kept getting lyrics in my head that didn't belong to the song yet I thought it would be great if there was a version of the song that I had the lyrics in my head so I wrote down the lyrics I was feeling and this is what I came up with

    There is fear
    There is greed
    And right inbetween the lines
    There stands poverty
    and we that have seen
    One too many things
    Like all the blood, and all the tragedies

    I refuse to collect
    These useless things
    The mirgraines that are caused by
    seemingly endless posibilites

    I'm, so tired of your curruption!
    We've held back too long!
    It's time for your destruction!
    I can't stand your false honesty!
    It's time for your demise!
    We're going to erase your
    visons of make believe!

    There are those
    That can not see
    Can not differciate
    all the lies from the honesty
    And there are those who have tried
    and other who have died
    I'm so tired of, confusing guilt with pride
    So I won't abide when you cry
    There are too many lives you have wasted
    I'm conviced, that you can't even taste it


    So, come.. admit to what you've done

    I'm, so tired of your curruption!
    We've held back too long!
    It's time for your destruction!
    I can't stand your false honesty!
    It's time for your demise!
    We're going to erase your
    visons of make believe!

    I'm, so tired of your curruption!
    We've held back too long!
    It's time for your destruction!
    I can't stand your false honesty!
    It's time for your demise!
    We're going to erase your
    visons of make believe!
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    I don't want ot call this an alteration of No more sorrow, basicly, it's inspired by it. I dont know. Tell me what you think of these lyrics. C&C please :)
     
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    Arlene

    Arlene Oh what tangled webs we weave LPA Super Member

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    Hmm *taps chin* Interesting. Not bad, actually. :)
     

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