What doesn't kill her, will come after you

Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by Seinfeld, Jul 9, 2008.

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    Seinfeld

    Seinfeld We are the nobodies LPA Super Member

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    What doesn't kill her, will come after you:

    Narcissistic, you say
    Yet she bathes in self-loathing
    She looks into the mirror
    and says she's happy to have her mothers eyes,
    >>>
    because they're "oh, so pretty!"
    But in all honesty, it's pretty obvious,
    she might as well just tell you:
    "At least I wish you'd tell that to me"

    She's always been daddy's little girl...for the night
    And catching your attention's been nothing but a fight

    Now...

    Don't come looking, when she's nowhere to be found
    Not that you'd care, but just don't
    Since it's always been so easy for you to say "I won't."
    Just to roll over, and get up in other beds
    After all her telling you: "Listen, looky here! I love yo- oh just forget it"

    Can't you see, you're the narcissistic one?
    Always laying tacs on her paths,
    just so you can have your fun

    You're always taking her for granted,
    and by so bluntly saying: "Baby, you've got gorgeous hips"
    You just prove, you could never be even half the being she is

    And I know that it kills you inside.
    I know that it kills you, but that's quite alright.
     
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    Dean

    Dean LPA Addict LPA Addict

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    that's good. there's some nice wordplay in there, like the "roll over" part and the alternate uses of "pretty".
     
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    Speed Freak

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    Awesome stuff...really clever use of words..:)
     

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