Writing: We Glimpsed The Heavens, Together.

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    Theazninvasion68

    Theazninvasion68 It's like blood to a vampire, our tragic desire. LPA Super VIP

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    I saw you standing beside,

    and I couldn’t see beyond your facade.

    It was a shame you were all quiet and alone,

    Like a kingdom long gone, an empty throne.



    I gave you a paper star,

    and I saw you look up from afar.

    It was a beautiful to see behind your mask

    Like a star in the sky, I hoped it would last.



    I shared my sparse meal with you,

    and I smiled as we grew.

    The rhythm of your heart was musical to my ears,

    Like a novel in disguise, I heard you listen to my tears.



    I lit a lantern for you,

    and watched as your shadows flew.

    It was a relief to cast aside your past,

    Like a spring flower, I could finally ask.



    I grabbed your hand and we went,

    And through the city limits to find our ascent.

    It was beside the teal ocean,

    Like watery potion, I felt each heartfelt motion.



    I leaned in and felt a soft, warm bliss;

    and lost myself when we shared this.

    It was when the sky above opened a new abyss,

    Together, we glimpsed the heavens eclipse.
     
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    Erica

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    Dig it, lovely work.
     
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    Dragondust

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    I like it ...well done!
     
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    Theazninvasion68

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    Thanks you two :) I know you guys are a majority of the writings threads on here... Appreciate the comments.
     
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    polleo

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    Pretty beautiful, I like it!
     

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