I don't know what the fuck to say about this. Darkness engulfs all of my memory, Lost in an array of confusion and bedlam, Waterfalls are beautiful. Lost without an escape, Suffering tragic paranoia and horrific images, But waterfalls are still beautiful. Echoing words churn through my decaying mind, Slow movements and dull words, Waterfalls are beautiful. Severed from the world, Stuck in a lonely mind. Without a cause, I know what it feels like, To not have anything. To be alone in a dark cruel world, we are all alone. Waterfalls are beautiful. No use to fight the overwhelming sensation of not knowing, It only brings fear and pain. Waterfalls are beautiful. Lapse of thought creates disruption, Only one way to stay here, just remember… Waterfalls are beautiful.
Wow. the waterfalls are beautiful bit is weird. Is so out of place yet seems to make so much sence. My interpreation of the waters are beautiful line is that even though all this weird scary shit is going on in the back of your mind there still that spaced out feeling. Great work.
Thank you both, and David you came close to interpreting how I meant it to be interpreted. The world sucks, it's evil and full of hate, sometimes you feel like there will never be an end or atleast some good. But there is good, and life is fun sometimes, you just have to remember that. It's a bit different, I thought it was kinda creative though.
this one does show some good creativity! i really like this one. it makes you think between the lines. always a good sign to to great poem! fab work!