Walking Upon the Edge of Silence

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    Will

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    "Walking Upon the Edge of Silence"

    Today is the first day of the rest of my life
    And I'm scared to death of what's to come my way
    I'm not sure if I should keep walking
    Or turn around and run
    The words I hear every day are scarring
    They drip from your teeth and stain the floor
    Asphyxiation would be a welcome happening
    I'd like to choke the breath out of my lungs
    If it could keep me from hearing
    Hearing the thoughts you've formed
    Though walking upon the edge of silence
    May not be the best of decisions
    At least it'd give me a good reason to learn Braille
    And block out the things you have to say
     
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    the_musicman

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    rofl


    it's good. it doesn't rhyme, though. i know all poems don't have to, it just bugs me when they don't.

    3/5
     
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    Evil Angel

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    i'd give it a 4/5
     
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    3.5/5 will be my ratings
     

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