Walk Away

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    Jamie

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    [Verse]
    Feel the hate beneath the flesh
    Hear the pain crawl through my chest
    Cry out in agony my name
    Slowly rotting inside my heart
    Feeling cursed with nowhere to run
    Show me the knife edge
    Take it to my skin
    Penatrate me from within

    [Chorus]
    Leave me alone
    Walk away from my tortured soul
    I can't take the preassure
    I can't take this shit no more

    [Verse]
    Don't hold your breath
    Seething agony grips your face
    And I can't kill demons
    Should have killed their creators
    Turn my insides black with hate
    Nothing has a deep meaning
    Turn my pain into lust
    Show me the blades edge
    Take it to my veins
    Penetrate me from within

    [Chorus]
    Leave me alone
    Walk away from my tortured soul
    I can't take the preassure
    I can't take this shit no more

    [Guitar Breakdown]

    [Chorus]
     
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    forgottenlp52

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    It sounds good. I wanna here the song with like the band and all. Is it like a hard rock song, or is it kinda slow?
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl

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    Sounds real good.
     
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    D_A_V_I_D

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    Your last couple of songs/poems have been pretty good, but this one is much better, i really like it. Sounds good. Keep it up. B)
     
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    fallenangel

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    i really like this one! ;)
     
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    Jamie

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    Luke

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    This is pretty cool :)
     
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    saunderitos

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    sorry,but i didnt like this very much

    i felt the song didnt flow that well ,the beggining was ok,but it got worse.

    sorry about that,not my cup of tea
     
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    El Muerto

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    i disagree
    i like second verse more than first
     

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