Vampire

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    Luke

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    For those confused about why I'm writing lyrics about a vampire,the vampire is a metaphor for war.



    You live for bloodshed
    You love seeing tears
    Your pleasure is invoking
    Lost childhood fears
    When the sky is black
    It’s the time when you strike
    Hearing the screams of agony
    Is only to what you like
    You’ve existed for all time
    And yet you never leave
    Why do you linger here?
    Haven’t you taken the lives you need?
    But you always return
    For more blood to take
    You’re remorseless but now I see
    It’s for someone else’s sake

    Your dark sense of moral
    Is apparently ok
    Just as long as you strike
    In a certain way
    You’re only taking orders
    But does that make it right?
    That you can kill whoever, how many you want
    And turn the day to night

    The chilling sounds you make
    Are heard from miles away
    It’s only what’s more haunting
    Than you’re evil, vampiric ways
    Despite your massacre
    There are some who still survive
    But all of which afterwards
    Are deathly traumatised
    And we call them heroes
    For surviving your onslaught
    But volunteering to fight
    Means their integrity was bought
    And soon you’ll strike again
    Much worse then before
    Thoughts of not being massacred
    Are all we can hope for

    Your dark sense of moral
    Is apparently ok
    Just as long as you strike
    In a certain way
    You’re only taking orders
    But does that make it right?
    That you can kill whoever, how many you want
    And turn the day to night

    I just ask why
    Why do you exist?
    I scream this to the world
    While clenching my fist
    I hope for an end
    To your unjust cause
    But for now I sit in silence
    Because there’s nothing I can do to stop it
    (Nothing anyone can do)

    Your dark sense of moral
    Is apparently ok
    Just as long as you strike
    In a certain way
    You’re only taking orders
    But does that make it right?
    That you can kill whoever, how many you want
    And turn the day to night

    The blood is on your hands
    Fuck you and your sense of wrong and right
    Your time is at hand
    So prepare for your last fight
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl

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    quite long and good.
     
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    notneo

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    Its great . Wierd topic but uve written reallt good.
     
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    i really like it! very clever cause i could imagine what you are trying to get across and the message that you are conveying is very clear.

    well done, this is good work! ;)
     
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    It's awesome :D


    And good look with the contract! :D
     
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    arT saveS

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    Wow, this is very good. And I like you using "vampire" as a metaphor for "war". Fits very well. But one thing that I disliked was that it seemed some of the rhyming was forced.
    That part for instance.

    But nevertheless, it was still very well written and I think it was really good.
     
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    Luke

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    Thanks for all the comments ^_^
     
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    That was great!

    loved the metaphor B)
     
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    Luke

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    Thanks ^_^
     

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