Valentines Day Remix Concept

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    The Emptiness Machine

    The Emptiness Machine Out of the abyss. LPA Über VIP

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    Haha. NOT AGAIN. hey atleast this one doesnt haved me SINGING. lol .. sing..
    Anyway here.

    http://www.sendspace.com/file/g0pqj6

    I tried rapping again, i messed it up at the end, made it go to slow. forgot the words. owell.

    here are some lyrics.

    My insides all turn to ash
    So slow
    And blew away as I collasped
    So cold
    A black wind took them away
    From sight
    Another darkness over day
    That night

    And the clouds above moved closer
    Looking so dissatisfied
    But the heartless wind kept blowing, blowing

    I use to be my own protection
    But not now.
    Cus my path has lost direction`...
    Somehow

    A black wind took you away
    From sight
    Another darkness over day
    That night

    And the clouds above moved closer
    Looking so dissatisfied
    And the ground below grew colder
    As the put you down inside
    But the heartlesswind kept blowing

    So now your gone
    And I was wrong
    I never knew what it was like
    To be alone

    My path is lost just like the infinate directions I've walked with my spare time
    I went back over my thoughts standing in solitude with the dark.
    You left with out a good bye and with out a reason as to telling me why
    I sit watching my pride subside and I can't feel a thing
    My heart is crushed just like a birds broken wing
    But one thing about my pain is it's eternally sore
    I'm looking out the window and remembering those days before
    Wishing for more, when I wasn't cold, home or all alone


    (On a Valentines Day)
    I use to be my own protection
    But not now
    Cus my mind has lost direction
    Somehow

    I use to be my own protection
    But not now
    Cus my mind has lost direction
    Somehow
     
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    Gitsnik

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    Not bad. Some sentences make me think of some LP songs.
     
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    Shadester

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    Better than the last attempt but still needs work.

    The rapping needs to be done faster and we should be able to hear the tune in the back. Then it would sound a lot better.
     

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