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    Cal

    Cal LPA Super Member LPA Super Member

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    The voice tells me what to do
    [sometimes it betrays me]
    i cannot take it anymore
    [darkness is falling i cant see]
    i need some room to breath
    why wont you get up and leave
    ive lost control way too much
    too mistaken - out of touch
    why wont you just go away
    the less i think the more u say
    i find that out every day
    [your even there when i close my eyes]

    i close my eyes and try to wake up
    [why wont it end cant we break up]
    the dark clouds pulling over
    [untill a new day begins]
    no matter what we've done
    [it feels like we've just begun]

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    This is a little peice i jotted down while i was having stomach pains which hurt so bad, afterwords i started to piss blood agan like i used to, so i dunno whats wrong there

    its my first song in ages so

    read n reply
     
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    Terry

    Terry Yeah, but I wish you were my shadow. LPA Super Member

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    Wow . . . . . really great . . sorry about your illness, though. ^_^
     
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    LinkinTheory

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    That's pretty good. That must really be nasty though. the poem gets a (9/10)
     
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    Jamie

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    I get the same thing, but I dont get stomach pains, but I do pee blood :angry: and I dont like it :(
     
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    GrnEyedBeauty82

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    wow awesome writing and sorry to hear :(
     
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    MaDd BoKo 03

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    I didn't come here to talk about blood pissing and whatnots
     
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    Cal

    Cal LPA Super Member LPA Super Member

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    yea

    *hits u all with the off topic stick*
     
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    LinkinTheory

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    Hey, I want one. . .
     

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